1 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2023 03:44 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
Haha you pack so much in this one! Just typical life with two teenagers one going off to college..
Author's Response: I really love the idea of Jim and Pam being all domestic and living a normal life after all that drama. I do feel for Pam here, though. Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2021 01:11 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
I'm always so impressed by these 55 word challenges (I just don't think I could ever write that concisely) - and this is so great! I love the bit about the fourth time being for them so much. And Jim noticing Pam's one quiet sniffle, and his wordless comfort for her (and Phil's reaction to it, lol), and Phil and Cece bickering...I love all of it. You've also made me want to re-read the Irrigation Room, which is excellent.
Author's Response: They have their challenges - I think to do them well the idea has to really come to you whole cloth. I'm really glad you liked this one though! I love this sort of bittersweet moment in a happy life for them and trying to make it feel real.
1 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2021 04:22 am Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
What a lovely link up! This packed in so much emotion into such a small space.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! Glad you liked it.
1 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2021 04:07 am Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
Awww, such a sweet story! And I like how it circled! And I like the pinkies part! And I like the 'everything that ever pulled him back is coming with him' part! And I like the shout-out to the 'The Irrigation Room'! And I like it when...
*repeats about ten more times*
And I really like this story! Thank you :)
Author's Response: Coming up with the parallels here was a lot of fun. Not something I think I'd be capable of for a story that would fill a whole page, but an interesting challenge within the parameters. Anyhow, really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing.
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2021 11:39 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
What a lovely link up! This packed in so much emotion into such a small space.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! Glad you liked it.
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2021 07:19 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
Omg. Why have I not read this?! Thank you so much for updating because I would have missed out on the shortest lil drabble that made me say AWWWW so loudly it made my brother ask me what had happened. My fluffy heart exploded, that’s what. Aly is right: I am proud.
Author's Response: I MADE TPB PROUD OF MY FLUFF. This is the greatest honor I have ever received. (Consider it a "congrats on finishing your bachelor's" present!)
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2021 06:51 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
That’s okay, I wanted to cry tonight anyway.
This was adorably cute. Tpb will be proud. The way you described Jim finally leaving Scranton because Pam is with him was just perfect. And then how they are going back because the kiddos are all grown up. Ouch. I love it. Linking their pinkies and Jim kissing Pam’s hand is going straight into this year’s favorite moments dundies.
Author's Response: If I can write fluff that makes TPB proud, that will... literally be the greatest honor I have ever received.
Yeah, sunrise, sunset. And I'm sure it felt just that fast for Jim and Pam, too.
All these years later, Jim still loves Pam. Duh.
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2021 06:34 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
I'm not crying, YOU'RE crying...I'm not crying, YOU'RE crying!
Beautiful. d84;a039;
Author's Response: Please don't cry! Jim's right - they're never really gone. They take a piece of you with them. I'm glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2021 05:43 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
got so emotional I forgot to leave the jelly bean!
Author's Response: Anything but that!
Date: June 09, 2021 05:37 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
Ok and I'm crying again!!!!
She sniffles once, quietly, listening to their babies. (once our babies, always our babies)
This was perfect...right down to the last line with Phil.
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for getting me thinking about this one again! Once you mentioned that they're the ones in the front seat now it basically wrote itself.
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2021 05:26 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2028
That was lovely. Phil's eye roll really sold it. Short, sweet, but a lot of fun and extreamly heartfelt.
Author's Response: Yeah, I needed a parallel to Pam making faces from shotgun from Chapter One, and Phil being teenage-grossed out by his parents' love was a hanging curve. Glad you enjoyed!