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Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2020 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 4

Lovely chapter. I like how Pam and Jim are advancing in their relationship, but at a realistic slow pace, considering everything Pam’s been through.
I really don’t like Karen! Can she not the get the clue? I just REALLY hope that Pam doesn’t tell Jim that he should see other people while she gets better. That would just be cruel for everyone. We want a happy Pam and a Karen that gets sent packing LOL

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2020 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ok, finally catching up here, and man have you done a great job with this sequel so far. Not to disparage the original, but this is much more my speed. Karen's obvious interest in Jim compared to Pam's baby steps is an interesting juxtaposition. I cant help but hope for the moment when Karen realizes she never had a chance, I'm sure it'll be great. I'm also interested to see her surprise for Jim, especially since she'd really be showing her hand since there would be no way for her to know his favorite food than to ask Pam, so waiting to see what happens there too!

I'm glad that Pam and Jim are communicating here, not to mention going on a nondate, or was lovely.

Pam and her mom reconnecting was also lovely.

Great chapter all around, looking forward to whatever comes next.

Ps, dagnabbit mobile, big thumbs little buttons.

Reviewer: SES Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2020 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

This was a very nice start to their relationship.
I like how they are really starting to communicate with each other.
Karen is at the point trying too hard.
It’s sad and desperate.
Why didn’t Pam bring it up at dinner?
If they are setting boundaries then I would guess that Pam would bring up to Jim how uncomfortable Karen is making her.
Jim better watch out because Karen has some Jodi Arias vibes going on. LOL
Please update soon.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2020 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

Not really liking this Karen. Seems she sees Jim as a target rather than a person. Also that Pam is something to run rough shod over. Thus interrupting them with the gum and the stark smiles. Part of me is wondering if this will mean there's something for Pam to fight for/against. In her conversation with Jim at dinner it seems like she's sure of somethings, but not so much other things. But we'll see.

Loved the talk at dinner. Very honest and open for the two of them. Pam not being sure that she's worth it to Jim rings true. So does his reassurances. I love that he's still there, he's letting her take the lead which is so great for him. The last thing she needs is for another guy to push her into anything she's not ready for.

The antics at the office were classic Micheal as well. Nicely done there.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2020 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

Considering the subject matter, this is actually a remarkably romantic chapter - and the take it slow, let things flow naturally approach seems like a good fit for their relationship and for where Pam is in her life, especially if she's actually going to be communicating how she feels with Jim like this.

The conference room meeting felt very canon, down to Stanley's unexpected metldown.

Oh, Karen. Honey. The pieces are all there, you just need to be willing to put them together.

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