1 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2020 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Another solid chapter - it's good to see Pam confronting the scars left on her psyche directly, and thank goodness that at least SOMEONE in the office had the decency to apologize for how they treated her. (Interesting choice to make it Angela, too.)
Thank goodness for Michael in this chapter - whatever his flaws, he's a good person to have in your corner sometimes. And using his lines from Toby's Play was a nice touch.
Looking forward to seeing Pam taking the next steps forward, however tentative they may be!
Date: October 04, 2020 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was a great chapter to get into Pam's mindset. The dark dreams followed by dark thoughts to start things off seemed really appropriate considering her past. Maybe she needs a nightlight? Or a Jim to hold the shadows back.
The thing is the dreams lead really well into her overanalizing things around the office. Sure Andy is kind of new, but you'd think by now she'd realize he's also kind of a moron. Though her suspicions to seem to be confirmed by what she heard outside the bathroom. Jim's expression though should have also been a clue for her.
However, and I love this by the way, Micheal comes through for her. I love good Micheal moments and you knocked this one out of the park. He's still is bumblinig oafish baffoon self, but inso doing he's also honest with her. Loved how well you mixed those together. Just wonderful. As always can't wait for more.
Date: October 04, 2020 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
If Jim really is just being polite to the whore Karen then really needs to man up because he is just pushing Pam away. If Karen is throwing herself at Jim without his consent then that is definitely sexual harassment or even assault and he needs to go to HR.
1 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2020 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awwwww! I LOVE when Michael has moments of clarity! He is the best, I love how he built Pam up in his own unique way.
What a great chapter.