Date: January 13, 2021 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 19
Poor Pam. It totally makes sense that this would be a setback from all her progress, she's being dragged right back into that place and feeling like there's no way to control Roy, hearing his voice in her head all over again. But still, hard to read.
Not making a request or anything, but I would love to see both Roy and Kenny get their full-on comeuppance in this story. The level of impunity Kenny in particular is experiencing right now is infuriating (and infuriatingly realistic). I love that Jim knows just the right buttons to push to help her keep in control at this moment, though.
Too bad they didn't get to enjoy Jim's prank more, that sounded like a clever one.
Date: January 13, 2021 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
I'm right there with Jim. Ready for all this to be done. Seems like a bit of a backslide for Pam here. Just when it feels like she's gotten some strength in her it comes down again. I get why. I am hoping she finds that strength again. Finds a fire in her to burn Roy to the ground for what he did to her. Though Dwight's comment there seems interesting. The when the hunter becomes the hunted is when the hunter knows fear. Could serve to foreshadow something? I really hope so at least. Really looking forward to where we go from here.
Date: January 13, 2021 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 19
Your writing is just so powerful. I'm still reading. Take as much or as little to tell the story. Cliffhangers are not necessarily a bad thing.
Date: January 13, 2021 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wow, crazy chapter. Lot happened. We are really getting into the good stuff. But I do have a question. I’m a little confused on why Mrs.Beesly has to testify. Why doesn’t she have a choice?
Date: January 13, 2021 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 19
Don’t think anyone has started to stop reading! We are all loving it!