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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2021 07:58 am Title: Chapter 26

You did some interesting work here exploring the different sorts of manipulations she lived through, and how awful it is for her to have to relive this.

I love this coded moment in the parking lot, and Pam's willingness to trust Jim and let him help.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2021 07:01 am Title: Chapter 26

Pam reliving even parts of her life with the monster is always tough. I mean you paint the picture of the monster so adept at controlling Pam. Playing off her guilt and insecurities for his own selfish reasons. It's good, as it's real, but it's tough.

I LOVED the quick conversation Jim and Pam have as they walk into meeting. Great use of a metaphor. Jim's right. Cutting away the dead branches helps the tree not only survive, but grow stronger and more full of life. Hopefully Pam realizes this too.

Good on them for getting good advice. Just answer yes or no and let the lawyer do his job. I get why Pam would want the monster to own up to what he's done. Maybe all this time in jail will have made him realize that. I kind of doubt it though. My thinking is all that time behind bars would have made him resent Pam even more and try to formulate even more ways for him to try and get back at her.

And then there goes Jim being just the best. Not only with the roses, but saying he wants to be there with her. He gets she has said she needs time to be on her own, but he also knows the toll this is all taking on her so he offers to be there with her. Protecting her not because she's weak, but because she's important. Well done Jim. Just the perfect kind of thing a good man should do.

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