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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2021 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 31

Pam's rage feels very promising. A lot like progress that she's now in a place where she feels the right to be enraged at him... like that's her place. And the idea that she's coming to realize that Roy was always lying about knowing he was doing wrong is both important and an interesting point.

Fascinating getting this perspective on moments from The Other Pam. And I'm glad you wrote in Roy losing it at the end. However manipulative may be, he is very much a guy who just can't help himself, and I'm glad everyone's getting to see that in open court.

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2021 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 31

Please tell me that the jury witnessed Roy’s outburst!
He is definitely the kind of person that would hang themselves, given enough rope.
I think that Pam was right when she thought that Roy would always expect her to be there no matter how evil he was.
That’s probably what he Roy felt in canon as well, so he could take her granted.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2021 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 31

Nice to have some testimony go Pam's way. Though there were a few times I could have seen where the defense attorney could have cut in again when Murphy was asking Toby to repeat some of his testimony on the stand.

"Objection! Asked and answered."

"Sustained. Move on to new questions Mr. Murphy."

Other than that, nice way to see how things are progressing. The first day seemed to be a trial. This second day was one too, but she seems stronger. Especially with some strong men in her corner ready to defend her from all comers.

Roy's outburst seemed very fitting. Most likely he thinks he's going to get off somehow. Almost as if he believes his own lies that he's done nothing wrong. It's only a matter of time before the whole trial is over, Pam comes home, and things get back to normal between them and he can go back to ruling over her. However things are not back to normal and never will be. He's incapable of understanding that and the only reaction he has left is unbridled anger. And the judge and jury saw that too. Nice way to bring that out. Also loved that Jim and William are right there in an instant. There's no way those two are letting Roy near Pam ever again.

Great job with this one.

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