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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2021 09:16 am Title: Chapter 43

I think you did a good job acknowledging both the way in which this whole experience is re-traumatizing Pam and the progress she's made in being angry at Roy here.

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2021 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 43

I just read Warrior 4’s review, and I agree that I would love to see Pam’s family rip into Roy’s mom for raising such a monster. Especially since Roy’s mom is such a bitch.

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2021 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 43

You don’t have to worry about trying
to wrap up this story because I would
be happy to see it go on forever.
Jim was right that Roy didn’t really deny the abuse.
Roy is definitely the type of person who doesn’t see it as abuse if it’s to punish the other person.
Also will there be some sort of epilogue?
I’m out of jellybeans for this story, so here’s a 🫖.
Please update soon.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2021 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 43

Loved that Murphy was able to get to Roy here. That he's been able to show time and again Roy's character, or lack thereof. Also there's something else I just realized. When Pam was on the stand Roy repeatedly jumped up and shouted at her in a frothing rage. Pam stayed outwardly quiet. Something I'm sure the jury could see as well. Jim's insight there at the end is also telling. Roy never admitted what he did, he also never denied it.

Yes this story is getting long, but I'm okay with that. It's your story to tell and it feels like we've needed all these moments. Though I do really hope there's some scene coming where Team Beesly lays into Roy's mother for raising such a monster.

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