Reviews For Copper Strands
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Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2020 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1

The fact that you can break my heart with 55 words is pretty incredible. Haha well done!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. 

I took on this challenge to practice saying more with less to apply to my chapter story. Nice to see how effective a few words can be. 

Thanks again.  

 

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2020 05:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Holy crap. That was so good. I was so convinced this was going to have a happy ending. Boy was I wrong. You nailed this. Every line was perfect.

Author's Response:

What I was going for...

My writing is usually a lot more wordy so it's nice to know what came still come across with few words. 

Thanks so so much. Really means a lot.

 

 

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2020 04:43 am Title: Chapter 1

So much love and heartbreak in so few words. Beautiful work!
Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response:

Thanks so very much.

Good practice for me ---learning to say more with less. Trying to infuse into my longer works. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2020 12:16 am Title: Chapter 1

My heart. You told a lot of story in so few words here. Lovely writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. 

I honestly can say I was inspired by the talent I am coming across as I read more and more here.

I wanted to see if I could do it. 

 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2020 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

As someone who shares that issue with wordiness, I love the constraints that the 55-word format puts on you - it's always way harder than you think it's going to be. (TWSS)

I think you did a really good job with conveying the hurt Jim is going through in the post-Casino Night days briefly and powerfully. "Darkness returns as daylight begins" and the way you're using the metaphor of light here is just really poetic. I liked this one!

Author's Response:

First off - TWSS - always a laugh. It's said almost every day in my household now.

More importantly, thank you. 

It was a challenge for me but your praise says I can do it. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2020 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

The back and forth with this one is just superb. Especially with how quick this is. Hope and heartache all wrapped up into one. Excellent job.

Author's Response:

Many thanks.

When praise comes from writers I admire, such as yourself, it is that much more affirming. 

It was a real challenge for me but I'm glad I took it on.

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