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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2020 05:32 am Title: More Honest

Re: Jim Halpert confesses to murder, I think it slots in well stylistically, so if it fits with your overall plan, I say go for it. But it could certainly stand alone.

Author's Response: Okay, thanks for the advice.  :)

Reviewer: Sam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2020 03:36 am Title: More Honest

Loved the structure
Loved the dialogue
Loved the hairdo bit
Loved it

Author's Response: Loved this review


Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2020 03:45 pm Title: More Honest

I love the trip through memory lane in this chapter - they have a lot of history that all of a sudden is a lot more pleasant to think about together, and that history is so important to why they're moving so quickly, well worth going through.

Nice to see another chapter of this one! (You ought to post Jim Halpert Confesses to Murder when you get the chance, too!)

Author's Response: Actually, I was thinking about adding it as a chapter of this story. What do you think?

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2020 02:49 pm Title: More Honest

Lovely way for them to heal some old sores as well as have a fun walk down memory lane. I really love it when they realize all the previous times they've spent together mean a lot more than just simple friendship. It was the build-up of everything that makes them, them. And with lots of fun banter to boot. Nice job with this update. I really liked it.

Author's Response:

Yeah what did Pam say later on in the show, then it took 4 years?


Anyway, thank you!   :D

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