Date: March 28, 2021 12:58 pm Title: The Crustacean and The Key Lime
I just found this! I like your truncated style of writing. It's light and breezy yet conveys all the salient information and emotion.
This chapter evokes the road trips, hell, just leaving the house, that we all want at this point without dragging us through our recent history. Good onya!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad the writing style works for you, story too. :)
Date: March 27, 2021 04:59 pm Title: The Crustacean and The Key Lime
Awww, Pam look at you go whisking Jim away for a surprise out-of-town date like that. Delightful. Not only does she remember his favorite food, but they finally get the night away that they'd always hoped for. Just each other, good food, and well each other some more. Lots of fun with this one.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it, thanks!