Date: October 15, 2020 06:31 pm Title: Thursday
A nice way of showing that this is a marathon of a journey, not a sprint. Healing's not going to come instantly, but he's on the right path.
Author's Response: Exactly. He's wising up, knowing what he's done wrong and where he can improve. It's a tough journey, but worth it. Speaking from experience.
Date: October 15, 2020 06:26 pm Title: Friday
This looks to be a nice little side trip from your main story.
Jim sleeping in till 1pm seems to feel right. He's been under a lot of stress and now his body is already playing catch up.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, boy needed some rest.
Date: October 15, 2020 05:53 pm Title: Monday
Something that occurs to me - how much is the couples counseling going to play into Never Give Up? Is this going to serve as something of a replacement for that?
Author's Response: Not to go into spoiler territory, but yes, couples counseling will be addressed very soon.
Date: October 15, 2020 05:52 pm Title: Saturday
I like this touch - that a lot of what Jim was missing were things that drive parents up the wall sometimes.
Author's Response: We didn't get a lot of Dad Jim, which makes sense, but it's a joy to write.