1 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2020 12:36 am Title: The Beginning of October - 2008
Jeez, what is Dwight's PROBLEM here?
Interested in seeing where you go with this. Not too common a theme in fic to see a Pam who's happily settled with Jim sort of thrust out of the Dunder Mifflin bubble by someone's choice besides her own. Seems like a ripe area to explore!
Date: November 02, 2020 04:52 pm Title: The Beginning of October - 2008
My heart was just aching for poor Pam as I read this. Poor Pam trying to do something nice.
The way Jim turned her day around made it better but I do hope Karma finds its way back to Dwight and Jim has something to do with it.
Good luck on your Nanorimo challenge!
Author's Response:
Poor Pam indeed, my heart felt for her as well.
So far the challenge is going well! Here's hoping for great results!
1 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2020 10:56 pm Title: The Beginning of October - 2008
Okay, first off, Dwight is being a complete ass. I mean I know that's kind of his shtick, but seriously. And where does he even get that authority? Hiring and firing should be a Michael thing. I REALLY hope Jim does something above and beyond to get back at him for that.
Anyways, beyond my ire for Dwight right now, this has a really interesting set up. Good day to horrible day to great day. Loved Pam's thoughts in regards to her relationship with Jim. Lovely to see that in her personal life she's in a great place.
Skipping to the end, love that Jim is there for her. On one of her hardest days, he's at his best. Good job Jim. Then even better he ups the game with the proposal. Awww. Good job Jim.
So now here we go. What will Pam do? What will Jim do? Will he resign in protest? The future is wide open for them. Should be fun to see where it goes.
Author's Response: I did kind of make him into the worst person ever. It's a tad off from canon, but that is the beauty of AU! Thanks for the review! Always awesome reading yours.
1 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2020 09:21 pm Title: The Beginning of October - 2008
My God, this was written so well! I felt so bad for Pam! I mean, getting fired for bringing in donuts a few minutes late? Come on(not that that is out of character). But I love the interactions between her and Jim. He’s so sweet. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your compliment! It makes me so happy when people think I wrote something worth while. Dwight's just the ultimate jerk in this. I couldn't help it!