Date: December 12, 2024 06:28 am Title: Chapter 19
this story rewired my brain in such a good way UGH this was STUNNING
Date: December 12, 2024 06:13 am Title: Chapter 18
...no no no no no no please oh my god?
Date: December 12, 2024 05:59 am Title: Chapter 17
My heart is on the floor just mangled and broken...but also WHAT THE FUCK TOBY
Date: December 12, 2024 05:42 am Title: Chapter 16
...yeah I actually dont want Pam to be the murderer anymore i takw it back also fuck angela
Date: December 12, 2024 04:56 am Title: Chapter 15
Im SO TORN bec the fallout now if Pam is the murderer is too much 😭😭😭 but at the same time femme fatal pam is just TOO GOOD
Date: December 12, 2024 04:53 am Title: Chapter 15
yeah it's pam isnt it?
but also ...am i the only one who's been suspicious of all the drinks?? There were times when jim was... suspiciously tired or something and it was right after or adjacent to a drink of some sort...hmm
Date: December 12, 2024 03:24 am Title: Chapter 14
my jaw is is thru the Earth's core JESUS CHRIST HOW DID IT GET THIS MUCH WORSE WHAT
Date: December 12, 2024 03:13 am Title: Chapter 13
....okay but like...i dont think it was Pam bec i dont think she'd be that careless to just leave it out in the open like that? But also DAMN THAT ENDING THO
Date: December 12, 2024 01:42 am Title: Chapter 10
Im tempted to reread but Jim's notebook missing is sOO and again...idk really not against Pam having something to do with this id just feel bad for Jim but lets go!!
Date: December 12, 2024 12:39 am Title: Chapter 8
The suspense and OMG okay honestly?? Actually woulndt mind a killer Pam twist cuz damn girl packer had it coming sksks but i only wish it wasnt her for Jim's sake ahahaha
Date: December 12, 2024 12:04 am Title: Chapter 7
Cant say im too broken up over this death so.
THE KISS FINALLY AND OMG YES
Date: December 11, 2024 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh that was so precious!! And the plot thickens!! Im so excited
Date: December 11, 2024 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love JAM ESPECIALLY in different time periods omg i love this story already and the way you write their chemistry and inject key points from canon? I LOVE the atmosphere youve created here
Date: November 11, 2022 08:56 am Title: Chapter 19
Im a horrible person and just read this and my heart hurts in the best of ways. I think I was just as happy as Jim was when Pam showed up in the doorway. And then just the way they *are* when theyre together, it’s truly the best. I could read this story repeatedly and never get tired of it.
When her mouth brushed against his in a tease of a kiss and a promise of a lifetime together,
You have killed me once again, bt
1 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2022 08:34 am Title: Chapter 19
I was so excited to see this update and it did not disappoint. The only negative thing is that it's over. This was such a unique plot, you managed to dump our characters in another time, place, and situation but they were all recognizable and themselves.
Cannot wait for what you write next!
Date: October 23, 2022 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 19
“he could finally be finished with Savannah and murder and-“
Unlike me, who will never get over this story & how brilliant it is.
Date: October 23, 2022 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
“What am I supposed to say to that?”
How dare you??
What the actual hell was the ending to that chapter, BT?? Do you think making me cry is cool??
1 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2022 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 19
Great to see the final chapter up and it was worth the wait. A happy ending too!
Date: October 20, 2022 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know what has taken me this long to read this but, I LOVE IT. 😍😍
Date: October 20, 2022 07:40 am Title: Chapter 19
I'll admit, I didn't do a review last chapter because it was such a gut punch and I don't do well with angst (though it was certainly very well-written). But this? Not only was this a happy ending, but it's an ideal one.
I kinda hate that we don't hear from the rest of them (besides Stanley, Phyllis, Toby and Michael) but I do appreciate Dwight and Angela getting together. I love the fact that you have her working for Michael, some things never change. And of course you're bringing Helene into it, of course you are.
The two of them reconnecting was very sweet, talking about everything that happened and how it affected them. I especially love them acknowledging that they know practically nothing about each other but want to pursue the relationship anyway.
This has been QUITE the roller coaster, but a fun one. Thanks for an engaging and well-crafted story, well done.
Date: October 19, 2022 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for bringing this one in for a landing like this. After so long I admit I was starting to get worried. Pam just showing back up and not letting anything get in her way was just wonderful. Regardless of what Jim has to say she needs to see him again. And of course Jim feels the same way as soon as she rounds the door to his office. So yes apologies and explanations are in order but then they're right back to being Jim and Pam. Love it love it love it.
This whole story was a treat from start to finish. Trying to figure out whodunit. Watching the relationship between Jim and Pam start and grow. The way you worked in so many lines from canon in new ways, all delightful. A wonderful piece that you did a marvelous job with. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat.
1 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2022 10:13 pm Title: Prologue
I’ve been so desperate to read this for SO long, but couldn’t bear the thought of an unfinished murder mystery so I am so excited this is complete!!!
Date: October 19, 2022 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 19
TUNA. ARE YOU KIDDING ME???????????
SO happy to see you posting again, and in particular putting a bow on this one.
The transition out from the gut-punch of the last line of the previous chapter to the first line of this one is amazing. (CRUEL, but amazing.)
Nice to see Jim having realized some of his professional dreams here, even at the cost of the part of himself who dreamed them.
Oh. Poor Karen. Trust canon Karen: you're dodging a bullet, girl.
Feels like Pam charging through the newsroom to get to Jim's office is a pretty big moment of growth here.
SHE GOT. A JOB. WITH MICHAEL. AND HE'S HITTING. ON HELENE. Now THAT'S good remixing of canon.
"It’s funny, isn’t it, how quickly we knew that we had something special without knowing each other very much at all? It scared me, to be honest with you. I was reluctant to fully share myself with you because our connection was so powerful that I was terrified of how badly it would hurt once it was severed.” Rude.
"“I’m sorry that it caused so much…” she hesitated, searching for the right word. “Misinterpretation.”" No, THAT'S good remixing of canon.
"His arms were always meant to be around her waist, her hands were always meant to be threaded through his hair, they were always meant to be in the hallway of an old building in Philadelphia reuniting like this, so wrapped up in each other that everything else fell away." SO rude.
I'm glad this Dwight got his happy ending. And still humbly request another story in this series with Jim and Dwight as reluctant detecting partners in different eras.
"Then it's a date." YAY.
Okay. Again. I am thrilled to see Noir!Jim and Pam get their happy ending, but moreso to read your writing again.
Date: April 14, 2022 02:17 am Title: Chapter 18
This story just keeps getting deeper and richer and it pulls me further and further under its spell. You did such a beautiful job conveying Pam’s hurt and his need to remedy it. Also, you are just incredible at weaving in that canon dialogue in such new and fresh ways.
We truly ALL benefited from Coley did and I love it. :)
Date: March 29, 2022 11:35 am Title: Chapter 18
Wow, a decisive Toby! That's not something we see every day. Pretty fun seeing Michael make a competent point and Toby shutting him down for a change. This is the Chad Flenderman Toby always dreamed of being. (And he *still* doesn't end up with Pam.) Also, his obsession with the notebook and getting answers from Jim *might* be legitimate, but also makes me think everyone's secrets aren't quite as safe as he claims.
"Ryan probably felt as though he could learn a lot from Toby, while also likely being frustrated with himself for having the wool pulled over his eyes for so long." SO TRUE.
You know things are out of hand when Dwight's telling you to be reasonable. Also, ouch. I feel Pam's hurt here, but on the other hand, I also thought it might be her.
“What am I supposed to say to that?” First of all, how dare you.
"seated next to the desk of a rather severe looking woman with olive skin and straight black hair" Abbondanza.
Again. Why? How? What did we do to deserve that? Please fix it?