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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2023 11:12 pm Title: Roy

Well, at least it got her to Dunder Mifflin (and keep her there) so she meet her person.
Are you REALLY happy Pam? There is something missing!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 22, 2020 12:07 am Title: Roy

I'm intrigued by the idea that Pam is kind of talking herself into wanting this from the very beginning of her second go with Roy. That feels worth exploring in a longer format, too.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2020 11:08 am Title: Roy

That is a really interesting take on Roy's proposal. That even now she can feel's that there's something missing to use your words. Oh Pam, I love your romantic heart.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2020 10:55 am Title: Roy

Aww. This feels very real, and very much like how their proposal went. Something sweet but kind of low-key, more low-key than Pam is imagining. I know it's hard for Pam because she truly does love Roy, but I think she's starting to get a tiny bit of a hint that he's not her soulmate. Great job with this one.

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