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Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2020 11:02 am Title: Mason

D'awww, little kindergarten Pam is just really cute here. Absolutly sounds like the kind of story that goes into family story rotation.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2020 11:01 am Title: Jim

I love the implicit contrast you drew between Jim's proposal and Roy's first proposal. It doesn't matter how simple it is, it just has to be with the right man. I always love imagining them at her dorm after they got engaged, and I loved reading your version of that.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2020 10:59 am Title: Roy Part 2

Oh I so loved Dwight and Pam's conversation! I think even though Dwight has some pretty different ideas about romantic relationships than Pam does, he still makes her think about her relationship in a way that she really needs to. And then when Roy proposes again, and she misses the look on Jim's face. Ugh. You nailed that scene, my friend.

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Date: December 21, 2020 10:55 am Title: Roy

Aww. This feels very real, and very much like how their proposal went. Something sweet but kind of low-key, more low-key than Pam is imagining. I know it's hard for Pam because she truly does love Roy, but I think she's starting to get a tiny bit of a hint that he's not her soulmate. Great job with this one.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2020 10:53 am Title: Kameron

WOW okay. That's a bold move. But Kameron is a bold guy. Poor Pam LOL!

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Date: December 21, 2020 10:52 am Title: Jackson

Wow. What a douchebag. Middle school boys are gross, but it gets better, Pam, I promise!

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Date: December 21, 2020 10:50 am Title: Mason

What a sweet kindergarten wedding! Though I actually think my favorite part of this chapter was the childhood stories that Pam's parents have. She broke her leg throwing a tantrum? Me as hell!

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2020 10:41 am Title: Pam

This was perfectly sweet and fluffy. I absolutely loved it! Each chapter had me smiling because of how adorable they were. However, if I had to choose a favorite chapter it's definitely Pam suggesting the elope in Puerto Rico. Girl finally knows what she wants and goes after it. I love it. 1000 jellybeans for you, my friend!

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