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Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2022 08:54 am Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

Finally getting around to this one...

first let me say I very much enjoy the way you write scenes with a descriptiveness (is this a word?) that illustrates without overdoing it. It makes the reader feel like they are there rather being told what they are seeing.

*On the drive home, Pam told Jim about the two students she found making out in the janitor’s closet when she went to find some more paper towels for her classroom and how Michael mixed up the words “physics” and “psychic” in an email to her.* - this just tickled me - *D*

And this feels very Jim and pregnant Pam -

*Are there any Thai places that also serve chips and salsa?"

"If there aren't, there should be," he said, mouth full of apple.*

All Jim's good intentions to take the night to tell her being ruined by Karen (even if not her intention) was a twist not expected but well played.

Skipping to the end - again I feel like I was there on the car ride and then in the room. And that last line....ouch.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2022 06:00 am Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

Well, welcome back to this one. Though we get a whole host of S9 feelings in here. Jim not telling Pam about a big change. Pam not really being willing to talk about it. Add in a dash of S3 with Karen kind of messing things up and hey presto a recipe for some classic feeling JAM angst. Now granted we knew it was coming what with Jim being so hesitant and all.

I will say this for Jim, he hasn't actually made the decision yet. Yes he's thinking about it, yes he wants to, but thus far he hasn't accepted the offer. So that's a small point in his favor for sure.

Still Pam not kissing him goodnight is tough on both of them for sure.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2022 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

Nooooooo! So glad to have this story back! A real pleasure to read.

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2022 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

I love this story soooo much! What a delight to see it back! I’m the biggest fan of AU Office stories featuring Jam and I love this one, especially with a baby on the way and new beardy Jim and high school teachers with a crazy principal! Pleeeeease don’t make use wait longer than 18 months! I loved that Jim skipped practice for Pam, but like most things, waiting for a big discussion you’re avoiding will only yield bad things… confident that Jam can work this out, but it’s a rough night tonight. I think it’s even worse that Pam doesn’t seem furious, just sad and quiet and disappointed. Thanks for returning to this fave!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2022 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

I love this story soooo much! What a delight to see it back! I’m the biggest fan of AU Office stories featuring Jam and I love this one, especially with a baby on the way and new beardy Jim and high school teachers with a crazy principal! Pleeeeease don’t make use wait longer than 18 months! I loved that Jim skipped practice for Pam, but like most things, waiting for a big discussion you’re avoiding will only yield bad things… confident that Jam can work this out, but it’s a rough night tonight. I think it’s even worse that Pam doesn’t seem furious, just sad and quiet and disappointed. Thanks for returning to this fave!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2022 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

I have a lot of questions.

Number one, HOW DARE YOU.

Number two, where can we find angel investors for a Thai-Mex restaurant, because that's brilliant.

Number three, Karen breaking the news? Really? REALLY?

Number four, was that ending truly necessary?

Number five, you understand you'll be ceaselessly harassed if you don't update this sooner than another 18 months, yes?

Number six, HOW DARE YOU.

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2022 04:17 am Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

I only just read this the other week, so was excited to see an update. But 18 months for the next update? What? No!
That last line is just heartbreaking, please don't leave it there!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2022 03:36 am Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

THIS after 18 months?! OUCH.
I love that Jim skipped practice to stay with Pam 🥰, but what terrible timing from Karen (of all Mexican food places in Scranton, she *had* to be at that one). But THAT ENDING?! OUCH.

Now I'll be in my feels as I start my school day with my littles today :'(

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2022 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 7: Tour of Scranton Cuisine

Wow. Way to come back and just punch me in the face. I love that this year we’re almost getting a season 9-like story, itll be so fun (and so, so painful) to see how they go through it in teacher world. Pregnant teacher pam is my absolute favorite and I am soooo glad she’s back even if it means we have to go through some heartbreak. “It was the first time she had ever skipped kissing him goodnight.” I mean.. ow. I love it.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2021 04:32 am Title: Chapter 6: Hazelton High

Just re-read the first of these again all the way through. Still fantastic. Are you planning to carry on with this one?

Author's Response: *sigh* Yes, I'll finish it eventually. Hahaha I have a plan and an outline, just need to put it to paper. But I'm glad you still enjoy it! Maybe that will give me the motivation to pick it up again. :) 

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2021 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 6: Hazelton High

Always love an update for your fics (even if I'm 5ever late in reading and reviewing). I hope they find a place for Pam at Stanf- I mean Hazelton. Amazing job, friend!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2021 08:21 am Title: Chapter 6: Hazelton High

Oh Jim. Jim, Jim, Jim, Jim, Jim. In an alternate universe, something similar happens where you dont talk to your wife and guess what? You just about lose her. Dont make the same mistakes as that Jim. Also that salty line has me dead. I adore pregnant Pam.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2021 06:09 am Title: Chapter 6: Hazelton High

Well, I have to admit I did not see this coming in this mostly fluffy story - a Season 9 AU! It is an interesting conflict, seeing these two people who have throughout their relationship had a lot of time together without really having to carve it out dealing with a change to that routine. Ugh, Jim though - come on, man. This is not complicated. Talk to your wife. *shakes fist*

"And I know I’ve been craving salty things lately, but...this isn’t exactly what I had in mind.” Lol.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2021 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: Hazelton High

So yeah, this does seem to be setting things up. Kinda feels like Jim not talking to Pam about Athlead. Though this time around with Pam being pregnant does Jim really want to deal with all of that stress with her being pregnant? Remains to be seen.

Besides all that, it was nice to see that they're still crazy about each other. Great to get an update on this one.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2021 11:20 am Title: Chapter 5: Parent Teacher Conferences

This was a glorious use of Meredith and almost certainly exactly the way canon Meredith handles parent teacher conferences.

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2021 10:31 am Title: Chapter 5: Parent Teacher Conferences

Well, didn’t expect that ending, but I’m here for it!

That firework though...

Great chapter, WW!

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2021 08:47 am Title: Chapter 5: Parent Teacher Conferences

So I thought you were going for a Season 9 twist with the whole Hazelton thing but happy with the way it went - the ending all kinds of delicious.

The whole thing was happy fun from the pizza to Meredith to the chapter end notes.

LOVE

Reviewer: PBJ sandwich Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2021 08:08 am Title: Chapter 5: Parent Teacher Conferences

Hahaha this chapter was definitely not a "hot circle of garbage" lol

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2021 07:43 am Title: Chapter 5: Parent Teacher Conferences

Loved all the adapted canon references here. The garbage pizza vs. good pizza. Meredith trying, and failing, to start something with Jim. And of course adding in details from this world as well. Looking at you there sex handprint turned firework. It's always fun to see details like that.

Saucy Pam there as Jim is on the phone. Yes please! Turning our confident Jim back into his teenage self, barely able to control himself in front of a pretty girl. Just all sorts of sweet, sexy, playful, loving, I mean really, pick your adjective.

Great fun with this story as always. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2021 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 5: Parent Teacher Conferences

Aww this was such a fun chapter! Your Meredith is so spot on hahaha. “Sweet cheeks” is a hot circle of GOLD.
I’m dying to know what’s next with Jim’s job offer and what our favorite little lovebirds have in store for them!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2021 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 5: Parent Teacher Conferences

"Yep I'm really excited too."
"Yeah you are."

Dead. Heart stopped, not breathing, no pulse, dead.

Okay but for real, I loved everything about this. Meredith showing up for parent teacher conferences and asking if she can persuade Jim to raise Jake's grade as Pam just laughed beside him, it couldn't have been more perfect. And then Pam being so supportive of Jim wanting to take the coaching job. Ugh. And then the little bonus scene at the end with Pam in the button down and seducing Jim while he's on the phone? Murder me. Literally stab me in the heart cuz wow I loved that. Can't wait for the next chapter, that's getting posted now, right?

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2021 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 5: Parent Teacher Conferences

Well, didn’t expect that ending, but I’m here for it!

That firework though...

Great chapter, WW!

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2021 11:10 am Title: Chapter 4: The Conference

Fun stuff here. I got the giggles myself from the jokes and have experienced the silent, can’t breathe kind of laughter you describe.
Keep em coming.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2021 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Conference

I love this AU version of The Convention. This Michael seems very Michael in his charming, goofy, just-wants-to-be-loved-but-is-lame form. And I *loved* the duck hater joke.

Jim as a basketball coach at a rival high school could be fun! I'm glad you brought this one back.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2021 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Conference

Even with less JAM, what there was, was still great. I've got a feeling it's the pregnancy hormones that are starting to act up with Pam and her reaction to Michael's jokes. Now granted I thought they were fun, but I'm also a Dad and thus am always looking to add to my Dad joke repitore. So there's that.

Hello Danny and Karen. That's an interesting offer. Seems like shades of S9 Athleap though time will tell as we go forward. Everything else borrowed from canon was spot on. Loved all of it.

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