Date: June 14, 2021 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 13
I didn't realise quite how behind I'd got on this 😱 But I'm v excited that this means lots of chapters to read! I love Izzy in this (Pam ending up wearing the beet juice coffee is also very funny), and I love the way you've written Pam's excitement/slight freak out over the idea that Jim might like her. Can't wait for Jim's POV!
Author's Response: I'm delighted to have so many reviews to respond to! I'm glad you found the expression of Pam's freak out good! I am always a little worried when I write that sort of thing.
Date: May 15, 2021 10:02 am Title: Chapter 13
I just want to stop and say that Pam falling asleep on her watercolor of sunset is sooo adorable, and I need this picture in my life! Thank you for bringing it :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I really enjoy putting in throwaway references to young artist Pam, thanks for catching it.
Date: May 13, 2021 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Man, you have done a really good job giving Pam a believable and entertainingly neurotic inner monologue in this one.
I continue to love the energy Izzy is bringing to this. Poor Pam. Should've warned her. Karma. I mean, at least for Pam. Not so much for Izzy. Unless you count Dwight.
Author's Response: Thank you! Neuroses are a specialty ;). I hope you enjoy the Jim POV that I've just put up too!
1 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2021 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
*CACKLES* I've said it before, but I'll say it again, I'm loving Izzy. and the Izzy/Dwight stuff is so funny even if Dwangela is endgame for me!
Author's Response: Thanks! Dwangela is where this fic ultimately will point as well, but the Izzy/Dwight dynamic is a lot of fun to write first.
Date: May 13, 2021 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
I forgive you for the bait and switch about the delay in the Jim POV chapter because a spit-take is always good fun. Calling Starbucks coffee sludge is also a point in your favor there. Short and sweet true. Nice to see that Pam's getting a bit more perspective on where she stands with Jim and maybe where he stands with her.
Author's Response: Glad you forgive me: I updated with the Jim chapter now, so it's not a long delay ;). Pam and Jim are spiraling right now--but the spiral is going inwards, towards each other.