1 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2024 02:58 pm Title: She Comes and She Goes
Ooof, I cannot believe this story actually ends on its hottest point. I love their banter! I hope this ending is only temporary, I'm looking towards many more chapters!
1 [Report This]Date: March 26, 2024 02:40 pm Title: Call Me Captain Backfire
You actually manage to surprise me with every turn of this story! Thank you so much for sharing!
1 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2023 06:37 am Title: Pushing Forty in the Friend Zone
In my country, this is called to start the house by the roof. Start with a strange sexual arrangement and work your way back to love. I can't imagine how they're going to handle it.
Date: January 14, 2023 08:49 pm Title: She Comes and She Goes
This needs more chapters.
1 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2022 02:04 pm Title: She Comes and She Goes
Hi, could you please finish this one!!
1 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2022 05:18 pm Title: She Comes and She Goes
Holy shit, I love this. The banter. The tension. The sex.
I love how fun they both are whilst still staying true to their characters at this point in the timeline.
Basically just ADORE your writing.
1 [Report This]Date: May 05, 2022 06:36 pm Title: She Comes and She Goes
Coley this is so much fun and so steamy! I hope there's more. I love that you brought in Katy. The banter is spot on, as usual.
I'm only sorry it took me so long to catch up with this story.
1 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2022 09:45 pm Title: She Comes and She Goes
omg hiiiii. i can’t believe it took me nearby a month to found out it got updated. IM OBSESSED WITH IT PLS DONT EVER GO AWAY
1 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2022 08:43 pm Title: She Comes and She Goes
Obsessed. OBSESSED. This is so perfect and well written and just feels fun and lovely and the banter?? And the jealousy?? And the texts?? And the sex?? Like. It’s a modern day Jim and Pam dealing with their pent up feelings in the best way they know how and it is SO GOOD. I’ll wait forever for this story, no doubt about it. Obsessed.
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2022 08:36 pm Title: She Comes and She Goes
You just write them so well. I love their dialogue just as much as the spicy scenes, which I hope you know is high praise haha. Great work, I hope it continues!
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2022 11:34 am Title: She Comes and She Goes
Ohhhh I am so glad this is back! It's like you're giving the people what they want and yet, not giving the people what they want. So good!
1 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2022 06:03 am Title: She Comes and She Goes
Jealous Pam = Horny Pam. Really interesting take on the day Katy shows up now that Pam is free and she and Jim have this arrangement. They're trying so hard to keep things causal but the deeper they go into this thing of theirs, the more their feeling are coming out. Pam looking relieved when she compares how Jim looks at her vs. Katy. Jim doing everything he can to keep her around as long as possible. Already breaking their rules. I get the feeling that eventually one or both of them are going to say to the other, "I lied, I can't do causal", to quote an Ashton Kutcher movie. (The Guardian in case you're wondering, it was the one where he played a Coast Guard Rescue Swimmer)
And of course the sex in the stairway scene was super hot.
1 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2022 05:37 am Title: Pushing Forty in the Friend Zone
So glad to see you back with an update for this one, and I loved it. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens with their rulebook, and how Jim's stake in this 'relationship' compares with canon Jim's state of mind, and what happens with his Stamford plans, and.. and... and...
Just looking forward to more... [hopeful emoji]
1 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2022 09:34 am Title: She Comes and She Goes
COLEY. First of all, I freaking love jealous Pam in all scenarios, but this one especially. That tryst in the stairwell was amazing. I almost hope that they do break that rule again. I also love how freaking obvious (to us) it is that they dont want this to be a thing that needs rules and guidelines and everything but theyre both too stubborn to see it. I love it.
1 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2022 04:50 am Title: She Comes and She Goes
This has always been one of my favorite stories. How can it not be with that opening line? The banter between the two of them is amazing. Also, I was tearing up a bit reading them make up rules knowing that he's leaving. Gosh, Pam just throw yourself off the bridge and drown in Jim and see how it's going to go when he leaves. *bites fist* So nervous!
1 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2022 04:13 am Title: She Comes and She Goes
I liked the use of Katy here to get Pam all jealous and riled up, just like she did in Hot Girl. And it clearly worked.
The banter between Jim and Pam was really good. Those rules clearly aren’t going to be stuck to are they??
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2021 04:40 am Title: Call Me Captain Backfire
VERY nice.
1 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2021 05:45 pm Title: Call Me Captain Backfire
hoping to get more of this story soon!! im so HYPED! been waiting patiently (or not lol). i had to come and check!
1 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2021 05:41 pm Title: Pushing Forty in the Friend Zone
Gotta say that I never imagined Jim being the sly one. Not that I am complaining or not super excited about where this is going.
Jim being all slick and so..forward is new and sounds really interesting. Looking forward to this fwb situation turning into a mess before magic.
1 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2021 05:41 pm Title: Pushing Forty in the Friend Zone
Gotta say that I never imagined Jim being the sly one. Not that I am complaining or not super excited about where this is going.
Jim being all slick and so..forward is new and sounds really interesting. Looking forward to this fwb situation turning into a mess before magic.
1 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2021 08:19 pm Title: Call Me Captain Backfire
So: two chapters means more specific compliments for this.
1. Love that you chose Pam POV. Entirely the best option, given Jim's canonical feelings.
2. Good build between chapters including the sort of emotional edging you're doing.
3. Really like the choices you're making with their banter. Nice fusion.
1 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2021 08:10 pm Title: Pushing Forty in the Friend Zone
Well this is up to your usual standard, and don't think you're getting more compliments than that out of me for one chapter.
But that is a high compliment.
1 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2021 07:22 pm Title: Call Me Captain Backfire
There's definitely a way to comment on sexy chapters without making the author feel weird. Let me know if you figure it out because I haven't. In the least weird way possible -- this was amazing, I loved it, and I can't wait to read more!!!
Date: July 06, 2021 12:39 am Title: Call Me Captain Backfire
OMG! More More More!
1 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2021 12:34 am Title: Call Me Captain Backfire
God, I need to admit I looked for this story more than one to see if it was updated. The waiting was so worth it! I want more 🙏🏼🙏🏼 I love it here!