Date: August 02, 2022 12:39 pm Title: Stars
Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination with us. I also appreciate you letting us know the story won't be completed so I can stop my possibly obsessive checking to make sure I didn't somehow miss an update.
I'm sad this story won't be completed. Five Years and this fic had me particularly hooked.
Wishing you all the best!
Author's Response:
your very welcome, thank you for always sharing such wonderful reviews. I'm sorry this story wasn't able to be completed. thank you for everything Invisiblecynic <3
- Angel
Date: July 23, 2021 04:21 pm Title: Stars
Oooooof. The scene of him looking through the photo album is a GUT PUNCH.
Date: July 21, 2021 07:29 pm Title: Stars
First off, the photo artwork is gorgeous! Second, YES! I'm so here for a sequel!
Jim running off to Paris to find her? Hell. Yes! And for them to reunite? Even better!
Date: July 21, 2021 01:15 am Title: Stars
Nice to get Jim's perspective on everything here. You really get the sense that he's had a rough go of it with the divorce and everything. He tried to get over both of them, but Jim being Jim, he just can't. He still has Julia to think about as well.
However this fills in a lot of the gaps as to his reaction when Pam shows up. For years he'd been suffocating. Finally she shows up and new life is breathed into both of them. Nice way to bring that about. Should be interesting to see where we go from here.
Date: July 20, 2021 07:22 am Title: Stars
I was so happy to see this, what a great surprise! I loved five Years and was left wanting to know more about your Pam & Jim and how things would progress. You write so beautifully and describe their thoughts and emotions in a way that feels authentic to the characters. I like this couple you've created Nice to get Jim's POV about Pam's return. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: this review melted my heart! thank you so much for the compliment on my writing, and I'm glad that this fic was a "great surprise for you". hopefully you will continue to enjoy this story as it goes on!
Date: July 20, 2021 06:38 am Title: Stars
Yay!
I’m so glad you decided to give us a sequel.
Why did Jim give Karen full credit custody of Julia? He’s a good dad, and that’s a separate issue from being in a loveless relationship.
I liked seeing things from Jim’s POV.
It showed his depression pretty well, and that
he and Pam really are two peas in a pod.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: i'm so happy you enjoyed it! You put it so well, Jim an Pam are two peas in a pod. I also wanted to let you know that Karen does not have sole custody of Julia, they have joint custody.