1 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2021 05:47 pm Title: Fourteen years later...
Eloise! Aw, I love that they had a third child in Austin!
This was great! I love the insight to their future, and keeping Julia (and Karen, I guess) in their lives!
1 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2021 09:57 pm Title: Fourteen years later...
A lot of interesting potential conflicts being introduced here - Pam vs. Karen, the challenges of their blended family spending time together and Julia's relation to Pam and her father's new kids, Jim's schedule and what looks to be some unwanted distance between them. Interested to see where you go with this.
1 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2021 03:37 pm Title: Fourteen years later...
I was happy to see a new chapter up. The angst is thick here especially towards the end when you feel as if something big has or will be happening that Jim can't bring himself to discuss with Pam.
It's evident that she loves him deeply still. Not sure what Jim is thinking or feeling but I suspect we will soon.
Can't wait to see how Karen interacts with Pam, Jim, Julia and the kids.
Great chapter as always, even if it is S9 sad.
Author's Response: thank you for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2021 09:37 am Title: Fourteen years later...
14 years, wow! Definitely a big jump.
This chapter was a bit on the sad side,
but fitting with JAM in S9, and their lack of communication.
I’m not too worried about them though, because
I have faith that JAM will work it out.
I had to laugh at another review of
Karen living up to her name. 😂
I have also thought of how Karen turned
out to be a good name for the character.
I am curious about Pam and Karen’s
relationship after all these years.
It does seem very awkward.
Did Karen ever get remarried?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so happy to hear that you are enjoying the story so far. And to answer your question: No, Karen never got remarried. She's living in Scranton with Julia, happy as ever.
Date: July 31, 2021 04:42 am Title: Fourteen years later...
Big time jump. Nice to see Cece and Phil. Eloise seems darling. Kinda hard to read about Jim and Pam like this. Big S9 feels that's for sure. I really hope something changes. I was about to wonder about Julia. But there she is. Karen insists she have her own room and stays the first week? Kinda sounds like Karen is living up to her name.
Like I said a little heartbreaking to see Jim and Pam like this, but good writing nonetheless.
Author's Response: thank you for the review and the compliment, I'm glad your enjoying the story so far. And yes, Karen is 1000% living up to her name.