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Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2022 09:30 pm Title: Part II: Chapter 10. House Guests

Aw! I love that Randall opened his home up to Michael and Pam. I'm happy there's someone along the ride with them through this time travel business!

Reviewer: boredhswf Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2021 02:26 pm Title: Part II: Chapter 10. House Guests

Sorry, I'm so behind!

I really love the way you are showing the relationship between Michael and Pam. You've done a great job of having her be frustrated with him but still ultimately have a fondness for him. It was subtle on the show and you have worked it in wonderfully here.

I'm liking Randall even more now. And you might have said this before and admittedly I know very very little about HP but I love how you've shaped him into this Dumbledore-esque character.

Author's Response:

Thanks for catching up! - I always loved the Michael - Pam relationship and how it grows over the seasons...this fic is as much about them as it is about Jam - so love your mentioning that here.

Since I promised some HP, this was a good way to tie a bit more in (as you also know this fic is not hugely HP - really just borrowed their Time Turner and the headmaster)

Thanks again. 

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2021 08:47 pm Title: Part II: Chapter 10. House Guests

*It was in that situation it was fortunate Michael’s mind was in so many ways like that of a child’s, in that the circular logic was enough to end the discussion, at least temporarily.*

Loved this.

The George Foreman grill! lmao

*It was enough to make her want to hug him, and so she reached over and wrapped her arms around him in a clasp full of emotion. Michael, first stiff with resentment, after seconds in Pam’s arms, released the firm hold of his limbs and leaned into her embrace. His head felt like lead as it dropped onto her shoulder, as if holding the weight of everything they’d been through and all that he’d done.*

This is so soft! Love how Pam is with Michael in this story, it all feels very IC. I'm enjoying this ride! Excited to see what's in store next!

Author's Response:

I love the Michael and Pam relationship almost as much as the Jim Pam relationship and I've maybe said it before but this story is as much about that relationship as it is about Pam/Roy/Jim.

Thanks for your words- always love to hear.

 

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2021 02:45 pm Title: Part II: Chapter 10. House Guests

Thanks goodness for Randall! And bring on part III!

Author's Response:

Good old Randall !

 

You must be feeling a little like Pam with your knowledge of what's coming but just as for her - there are the little changes that occur -hope you are enjoying the new bits as you read again.

Thanks again for reading it then and now. 

Cheers 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2021 10:49 am Title: Part II: Chapter 10. House Guests

Thought you did well establishing Pam's disorientation here - and how it extends beyond just not knowing *where* she is.

Maybe it's having just spent the weekend with my nieces and nephew, but I found myself particular amused by Pam's parental exasperation with Michael here - how she tires of the constant whys and needs to be constantly warning him to be behave himself. Of course, he also has the childlike ability to accept this bizarre situation for what it is, so maybe he's not the worst possible partner for time travel. (Angela. Definitely Angela.) Wondering what Pam's corrected eyesight means going forward...

I honestly feel a little bad that Current Michael is getting yelled at for such an innocent mistake with the car here... I mean, *he's* not the one who ruined those folks' evening, that was... you know. Past him. And this reminder of Roy's less admirable tendencies right on the heels of all of this sounds like just the ticket for Pam.

Yikes. That's a bullet dodged with Angela. Not that she would've bought the time travel, but she definitely would've made a HUGE fuss about seeing Michael and Pam in whatever she assumes is a compromising position.

Of course, I'm also kind of with Michael in assuming that having a spare two weeks feels like a good time to do something he might not otherwise have time to do. If he's got to stay out of sight, why not learn a new language? I know it's pre-Duolingo, but I think he could make some progress.

Yikes. With great power comes great responsibility, and with knowing Michael Scott is time travelling means accept him as a houseguest. Poor Randall!

Author's Response:

Yeah well I feel like I wake up often that way, wondering how did I get here (ie - where did the time go) and I'm not a time traveler so I just pumped it up a notch for what Pam is going through.

Pam is kinda a surrogate mother to him even when they are not time traveling so this is just par for her course. 

As for the eyesight - it began as a way to simplify things as the contacts could have been a sticky thing to work in and when you can mess with logic and rules of the universe you are creating - well then why not? We will see if it has deeper meaning in the future (of this story).

Yeah I felt bad for Michael too which is why I had Pam hug him - aside from wanting to work in another near miss.

Ok - this is Michael we are talking about - you know how they say youth is wasted on the young - well time travel is wasted on the .. you know the rest.

Poor Randall - think of poor Gabby, his wife.

As always a big thank you for your review. 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2021 04:27 pm Title: Part II: Chapter 10. House Guests

So now where do we go from here? No big internal debates other than where are they going to spend their time. I'm sure we'll get more of those as Future Pam has a lot to mull over based on the events of the evening.

Though I do wonder about something. Future Pam now has clear physical vision. I'm wondering if that clarity will translate to other areas of her life. Time will tell.

Author's Response:

Cleverly worded review...always fun to read what you have to say.

It's true our characters need to stay away for a few weeks and that means we won't be seeing Jim for a while but that doesn't mean we won't be thinking of him. Roy, too. 

Thanks for the review as always.

Reviewer: Little Toro Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2021 02:54 pm Title: Part II: Chapter 10. House Guests

My two favorite things, the office and harry potter! I am really enjoying this story. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you for coming on the journey and sharing your review. It truly makes me happy to hear.

What always fascinated me about JK Rowling and her story besides all the fun magic and wild imagination was her ability to weave together things across 7 books and how things introduced had a way of coming back later.

Hope I do just a fraction of that. 

Thank you again for reading and reviewing. 

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