1 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2023 12:27 am Title: Chapter 3
What!? Roy (I assumed Roy) and Karen!? What a plot twist! What gonna happen next! I hope Pam and Jim see each other again! Of course break up with Roy and Karen. ASAP.
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2022 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ok,I may ne used to mood swings (along with hot flashes) but that my dear, gave me emotional whiplash! Yay, he's going after her!! How romantic and ballsy! Oh crap, who is THAT with Pam? Just hope it isn't Roy. It is, it's Roy isn't it? Then Karen? Ooof.
Kelly as a flight attendant was brilliant, Jim & Pam's banter, Pam falling asleep on Jim, loved it all.
I am so looking forward to what comes next.
Date: May 10, 2022 11:18 am Title: Chapter 3
And here comes the big kick in the gut. You can tell how much they want to be together. How well they fit together. How easy it is. Lots of cute moments with the ear buds and Pam falling asleep on his shoulder. Excellent Kelly voice too. Then way to go Jim! Rushing after her. Only to see her greeted by another guy like that. And then when he gets home Karen is in bed waiting for him. Oh that's a big heart rending twist to be sure. I have no idea where we're going to go from here but I need you to update like yesterday so we can find out.
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2022 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
"It is scientifically proven to taste better when flying through the air at hundreds of miles an hour." This is true, actually.
Oh, no. Kelly with a captive audience. I've had nightmares like that.
THE ACCIDENTAL HAND-HOLDING. THE ACCIDENTAL SHOULDER-SLEEPING. OPEN YOUR EYES, PEOPLE.
Holy CRAP. Now that was a twist I did not see coming at the end there... I'm assuming this means we'll see an update soon, as this would be simply rude otherwise.
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2022 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
YOU FUCKING DIDN'T.
HE KISSED HER, AND DID SO ALL THE WHILE KNOWING HE WAS DATING KAREN?!?! OH MY GOD, WW. THIS IS SO OUT OF YOUR WHEELHOUSE.
But I absolutely love it. Keep writing this, I need to see if they meet up again!!
UGH MY HEART
Date: May 09, 2022 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh I was afraid that was coming...but you got me on Jim's homecoming.
Lots of fun seeing Kelly and the butterfly moment in this new place.
Looking forward to where it's going to head now.
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2022 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
AHHHH!!
The way you unfolded this chapter was just brilliant. And the UST is amazing, I'm absolutely loving it!
*"Should I ask the flight attendant to cut the crusts off your sandwich too?"
He furrowed his brow as she continued.
"Because you're a child."*
HAHA Jim totally is a child. An adorable one, though.
Your Kelly was perfect.
*She leaned in, catching the scent of him again. They really could make a cologne out of it.*
Where are my freakin' heart eyes?
*The look on Pam's face mirrored his. He wanted to go back to watching Pretty in Pink and feeling the weight of her head on his shoulder as he breathed in the scent of her shampoo and forgot about everything else. He wanted to stay in this bubble they created where he didn't know her last name but knew she picked the pickles off her hamburger and wanted a house with a terrace and that she broke her arm in the third grade.
But he also knew that wasn't possible.*
Beautiful.
(Couldn't help but notice TPB won't read this so I hope that means there will more near-misses and delicious angst!)
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2022 10:42 am Title: Chapter 3
This was so cute and then BOOM you shattered my heart!! After being like go Jim! when he got off the plane (you got off the plane, I got off the plane, played through my mind), I then literally shouted out loud no!!! when Jim saw her kiss someone. And then he’s got Karen at home. Oh my god, you’re killing me.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2022 09:52 am Title: Chapter 3
“He wanted to stay in this bubble they created where he didn't know her last name but knew she picked the pickles off her hamburger and wanted a house with a terrace and that she broke her arm in the third grade.”
I loved SO much about this chapter, but especially this. I feel like this not only perfectly sums up this story so far but also Jim and Pam in general. So close and able to talk about so many things except for the things they need to know. Ugh. And then finding out that they BOTH had someone waiting for them at home?? My heart is broken. I love it.