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Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2022 04:08 am Title: Chapter 2

I finally was able to get to read this...and I'm enjoying.
I do that too, make up random stories for people I see.

I thought I caught a line there in the middle of Pam's POV that has me intrigued?

Reviewer: Trish Tinkerbell Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2022 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am really interested in knowing where you are taking this. They sounds exactly like them and I love the fact that this being AU, is so true to their characters. Looking forward for more.

Reviewer: Trish Tinkerbell Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2022 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am really interested in knowing where you are taking this. They sounds exactly like them and I love the fact that this being AU, is so true to their characters. Looking forward for more.

Reviewer: Trish Tinkerbell Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2022 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am really interested in knowing where you are taking this. They sounds exactly like them and I love the fact that this being AU, is so true to their characters. Looking forward for more.

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2022 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh this is super cute! Love that they’re continuing on the plane together! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2022 09:59 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this banter between them is so light and free and fun and immediate, and she smelled the fabric softener??? And she drew him a picture? Of them? And the story about Brad missing his daughter? And her garage? And they ended up? On the same plane again? My heart? How could you do this to me?

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2022 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

Sooooooo good! Make something happen between them on the plane! Like kissing! (I know this a K but kissing’s allowed!)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2022 09:42 am Title: Chapter 2

So, if I may, awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Loving their easy banter with each other. How they're both realizing that they just work well. It's all adorable. Pam's thoughts about how he interacts with Vanessa and how he also uses her favorite kind of fabric softener. Really great. Nice way to add in a little tension too with them thinking that though this is fun, it's kind of a single serving friendship that will end all to soon.

But it doesn't. Seems like fate is indeed playing a hand in all this. And they're helping things along too. Jim switching seats to be near her more, yeah big HUGE green flag there Pam. Really hope they both see it before to long.

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2022 05:01 am Title: Chapter 2

I love when they fall into their usual playfulness immediately. It’s definitely fate, Pam.

Jim’s tiny travel bottle of fabric softener was a cute way to fit that into this universe! And I love Pam thinking of him with kids, so sweet.

SHAKE SHACK. Okay that made me hungry.

And THAT HUG. I love how he asked (so sweet) and that she was just as into it as he was.

Really enjoying this, excited to see where it all leads!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2022 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ww this is SO good. The fact that you have been able to write the Jim and Pam we all know and love in this new setting is amazing. Their teasing, and understanding each other, and everything about them is perfect. I absolutely adore that Jim wanted to play the “whats their story” game, without knowing that Pam loves to do that. Cant wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2022 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was stinking CUTE! The gift shop items were freaking adorable (I love that he collects shot glasses from every city he's in), the FABRIC SOFTENER -insert heart eyes-, THE SWITCHING OF FLIGHTS AND SEATS.

My heart is full! This was too adorable, WW!!

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2022 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Who knew an airport could be this intriguing? This setup is fantastic, believable, and they are recognizable, no small feat. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter (or 20). For some reason I'd like a pickpocket to swipe Jim's phone. I have the feeling the caller is going to throw a wrench into this budding friendship.

Always laugh at the Mavis Beacon line. More please!

Reviewer: Yellowberry22 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2022 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Love this idea! Excited for the next update (and by that I mean checking every hour to see if it’s up yet). Good stuff!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2022 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

So this is starting out as all sorts of adorable. Love the running into each other with papers flying everywhere trope. And Jim has one of her drawings right from the off. Very cute. Also lots of fun that they're so taken with each other so quickly. Tons of sparks shooting off everywhere. I am kinda wondering who is trying to get a hold of Jim though. Looking forward to more.

Also Happy Birthday Em!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2022 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter, looking forward to more!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2022 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1

WW! UGH what?!?! You wrote the airport story for ME?! OF ALL PEOPLE?!

I absolutely loved this! Please tell me there’s more, I love this concept, love your writing, just UGH! I need to know about their date!!

I just love how the keep running into each other, how small their worlds are… God, I love this. WRITE MORE PLEASE!!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2022 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1

A meet less than cute! This feels very realistic to their first accidental meeting in an airport - it has the advantage of a place that can force strangers together for long waits with not much to do, but it's not a stress-free zone. (Being knocked over is always less charming than Nora Ephron and company would have you believe.) And the little hint of something deeper with the drawing was lovely.

It's an interesting take on Pam without Jim and Jim without Pam - the former recognizing her dissatisfaction on her own, the latter still stuck in his rut with nothing to pull him out.

"Spirit in the Sky." You slay me. And I kind of love the idea of them connecting far away from Scranton even with that tie still binding them.

Looking forward to seeing what's next! (And also the Anna Kendrick cameo the title clearly implies.)

Happy birthday Em!

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2022 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1

This is adorable. I love when Jim and Pam get picked up and put somewhere new but we get glimpses of the relationship we know through reimagined dialogue and moments and things like that. And I REALLY love how you put in Michael and Holly! So sweet. Looking forward to the rest of their time in the airport!

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2022 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1

How do you DO that?! Straight into the favourites of course *sigh*...

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2022 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Okay, so this is gonna be stinking cute.

*She wasn’t unhappy with her life. She had a lot to be grateful for and it could always be worse. But things had begun to feel stagnant—unremarkable, really. She was known to thrive in the comfort of familiarity. But now there was the nagging urge to change something. She wanted to glow too.*

Love the idea of Jim meeting Fancy New Beesly for the first time. Creates a different dynamic and I'm excited to see where you take this!

Happy birthday, Em!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2022 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love that their first interaction wasnt instant jokes and happiness, but then whenever they meet in the bar theyre so easily able to slip into the Jim and Pam we all know and love. I cannot wait for their Mcdonalds date and to see where else this goes!!

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