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Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2022 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

Since Jim is now the Vice President of advertising perhaps he could use Pam’s art skills. 🤔

Author's Response:

LOL Yeah, she can definitely contribute to some of his campaigns.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2022 10:14 am Title: Chapter 4

Love the fact they have an easy and family filled weekend. Feels like just the thing they needed. Then another heart to heart talk, this time a lot more gentle with each other as they admit what they should have done.

And here comes David with the key to really letting them realize everything. Gotta love Jim slamming the door in Dwight's face. Great moment there.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I wanted to take it easy on them after all they went through.  Plus, the kids deserve some time with their parents.  And they’re definitely easier on themselves and each other, though in the last chapter, they still have a bit to go.

I always planned for David to swoop in and save the day, so to speak.  He always saw potential in Jim and it makes sense that he’d want to promote him, if only to keep him around.  I loved writing that scene with Dwight, it’s definitely plausible, even in S9.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2022 10:11 am Title: Chapter 4

Awwwww. He got to see Cece dance after all!

Erin asking Jim if he's available right in front of David Wallace is peak Erin.

David Wallace coming through big time here!

Author's Response:

I know!  It felt really good writing that moment.  After what I put him to, I think he deserves it.

Man, I love writing Erin.  As for Wallace, I figured he wanted Jim to stay, and I’m kinda surprised he never promoted him in canon.  On the other hand, given all the grief Jim put David through, I can see him not promoting Jim just yet.

Thanks for the review!

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