Reviews For Without Words
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Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2023 11:07 am Title: Chapter 2

I love that Holly is Pam’s teacher… I can just see how kind and sweet and understanding she is with Pam— and how much she wants Pam to find her words! Of course we’re already getting a little inkling of who Roy is too.

This is such fascinating insight into selective mutism because of course Pam isn’t delayed… just anxious… but it’s hard for everyone else to see that. You can feel Helene’s anguish too.. especially when she has to convince Bill that they need to take her to a specialist. You write Pam in such a sweet, hopeful voice who just wants her parents to be proud of her… and that personification of the Monster who sits on her chest and keeps her words in… wow. Amazing insight! I love that Holly and Helene keep trying to bring her words out everyday… there’s always that little bit of hope that she can do it the next day— and I love that hopefulness— thank you for sharing and posting!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I’m so glad you enjoy it! Can’t wait to write more for y’all!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2023 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

Still love that Pam's comforted by the image of a teal teapot here. Nice she's got that going for her.

Author's Response: Teal teapot for life!

Author's Response: Teal teapot for life!

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