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Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2023 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oh Mr. Scott… what a sweet teacher.. and then he goes ahead in true Michael fashion oversteps both in role and in subject matter his first graders… on the other hand, wouldn’t it be fascinating to have The Classroom? Mr. Scott as first grade teacher with Jim, Pam, and Dwight as students?? Oh wait… you’re writing that!!! lol. And then we end with this sweet swing imagery which, to me, everything about Jim and Pam. Just darling! Thanks for bringing me back to old school days with my brand new school supplies— I could totally feel Pam’s heart beating with pride as she pulled out her new sketchbook for Jim— her WORDS!!! Thanks again!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2023 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oh Mr. Scott… what a sweet teacher.. and then he goes ahead in true Michael fashion oversteps both in role and in subject matter his first graders… on the other hand, wouldn’t it be fascinating to have The Classroom? Mr. Scott as first grade teacher with Jim, Pam, and Dwight as students?? Oh wait… you’re writing that!!! lol. And then we end with this sweet swing imagery which, to me, everything about Jim and Pam. Just darling! Thanks for bringing me back to old school days with my brand new school supplies— I could totally feel Pam’s heart beating with pride as she pulled out her new sketchbook for Jim— her WORDS!!! Thanks again!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much, I’m so glad you enjoy it! This makes me so happy, I truly cherish this comment!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2023 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 12

Dwight ranting while Jim eats Jello is always a ton of fun. Also that Jim stands up and gets more of the attention on himself to deflect any real or imagined anxiety from Pam is just a perfect low key support move. Lets Pam just enjoy being the back-up partner here.

Love that Penny is also looking out for her big sister. Now that there's something they can all kind of grab hold with Pam. Finally a way in and it feels like those who do love and support Pam want to encourage this as much as possible. Nice little metaphor with the swings there at the end too.

Author's Response: Thank you! I always look forward to your analysis, they  make me so happy! I really enjoy the swing symbolism in this story if you can’t tell already…

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2023 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 12

I love that Michael would be talking to first graders about his date. It really feels so true to him!
And Pam slowly coming out of her shell is just the cutest!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Only something Micheal would do!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Only something Micheal would do!

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