Date: April 01, 2023 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh what a darling chapter! Even though Jim sat on the bus with Karen and Pam sat alone, it was still wonderful to see how in awe Pam was at the art museum! I hope Helene is as impressed with how far Pam’s come as much as I am! Love this so much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, so glad!
Date: March 12, 2023 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 20
Feels like for the first time in her school career Pam is truly excited to get up for the day. Really nice to see that bit of progression. Kind of annoying that Karen is trying to hog Jim like this.
Then when they get there it's like she's become a new person. Quiet not because of fear but because of wonder. Looks like Jim is clocking that too. Especially with the hope in a frame watercolor there at the end. Nice use of it too.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! She’s getting there!
Date: March 10, 2023 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 20
How sweet!
I think my only suggestion would be… slow down b29;a039;
I know you mentioned missing a day to post.. life gets that way! Don’t rush these sweet characters and your wonderful story. Give yourself time b29;a039;b29;a039;
Author's Response: Oh thank you! I was getting nervous y’all were getting bored… but I’m happy to know you want it slower! Truly thank you!
Date: March 10, 2023 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh god, Pam being so excited for the field trip, only to sit in the corner of the bus and watch the trees. My poor heart!
The watercolour of the building!!!!
Have I mentioned I adore this?
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much!