Date: February 19, 2025 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is lovely, and really well written! Looking forward to chapter 5 and beyond.
1 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2025 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Sorry it’s taken me so long to review!! Very much enjoying this dose of fluff! Glad there’s no angst, my heart can’t take it right now! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: February 13, 2025 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nice to have some outside perspective on the matter. It also goes along with how she reached out to her Mom in canon. Nice bit of playful banter there. A bit of her heart overruling her mind in her telling him how she feels over the phone like that. Still good to see some honesty from her.
Feels like there might be some rough waters ahead with Roy. Breaking things off with him is isn't going to be fun or easy. However she'll have Jim by her side this time, so that'll be good. Still, Roy can be volatile. Remains to be seen how you'll have him react to all this. Nice job.
Date: February 12, 2025 12:14 am Title: Chapter 3
So a big rush of emotions and a few quite steamy kisses. Then it feels like their brains catch up and they wisely hit the brakes. Good on her for telling him she needs time. In canon the confession was kind of a do or die type of thing. There's more leeway here which is nice to see.
Love that she's getting some more confidence in her step. However this is also early seasons Pam we're talking about. Not one to really rush into a decision. How it's all going to shake out should be interesting. Nice job.
1 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2025 11:12 am Title: Chapter 2
Tons of fun JAM banter going back and forth everywhere here. Great job with that all. The party seemed like lot of fun too. It was really good to see them acting like this with each other. The fact that they're mistaken for a couple is fairly telling. As is the fact that Pam just says, "I'm engaged to someone else," and leaves it at that. She finally has a date for the wedding and is probably getting into hardcore planning by now. Yet when given the opportunity to gush about her upcoming wedding she doesn't. Clearly while her head might still be in that relationship, her heart isn't. Granted Roy not taking her out for Valentine's Day and also ditching her for this weekend isn't doing him any favors, but still.
Then after a scene that feels like it came right out of "Lady and The Tramp," Jim gets the courage to be totally honest. Kind of evil to leave it there, but as a fellow writer I get it. Tons of fun. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Jim's confession much earlier and when Pam's feeling good about being with him and is on the rocks with Roy. Should be fun to see.
1 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2025 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Trouble brewing between Pam and Roy. Feels like the bliss of setting the date has worn off and Roy is back to his old habits. Taking her for granted and generally not putting in a whole lot of effort. No wonder she's upset. Though she is also just letting things go instead of really pressing the issue. If she really wanted to go out for dinner and fight for the relationship she'd say so. Kinda feels like she's also kind of over the relationship as well.
And there's Jim. doing his best to just be calm and casual. Clearly he has ulterior motives, but he's trying to play it cool at this point. Should be fun to see where this one goes.
1 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2025 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, an interesting setup! I like the switching POV. Looking forward to it!