1 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2026 03:45 am Title: Chapter 4: Music
Argh they just need to get together already! And no Jim! Don’t talk to Katy, what are you doing???
Looking forward to the next chapter!
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2026 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day
Love this story idea, the doc crew at college, great choice!! I'm enjoying your writing style and can't wait to see how you are going to get our two favorite people together.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! Glad you're enjoying it so far! :-D
1 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2025 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day
This is fantastic! I can’t wait to see where it goes. You’ve really captured Jim and Pam well. I love college AUs. I hope that they get together fairly soon though and we see their college relationship.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm really glad you said that, because I was afraid I wouldn't be able to capture their characters well lol. Thanks for reading! :-)
1 [Report This]Date: December 20, 2025 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 4: Music
Great chapter!! The tension is so palpable!!! I’m waiting for Jim to snap!
But that ending!! Noooo don’t bring Katy to campus!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
1 [Report This]Date: December 20, 2025 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: Shoes
This was a great chapter! Very cute with her falling asleep on his bed. I really liked the line about her not remembering it but Jim did, and the cameras catching it all!
Not a weak chapter at all!
1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2025 01:48 am Title: Chapter 2: Dinner
I can feel the tension building already! And the disappointment that they both felt was a bit of a gut punch 😭
Think you nailed Kelly, she’s great!
Date: December 17, 2025 12:09 am Title: Chapter 2: Dinner
You did a good job with the dysfunction of Kelly and Ryan's "relationship'. I laughed at the introduction of Dwight Schrute, especially claiming that he had no need of psychology.Just one small tense error to address. Looking forward to more chapters.
Date: December 16, 2025 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day
I remember this story from somewhere. It must have been A03, I think. The documentary format works very well in any closed-space environment like a college. Just remember to check all your tenses are consistent throughout, as you lapsed into the present a couple of times. Good first chapter.
Author's Response: I appreciate you pointing that out!! I still struggle with tenses since I only used to write fics in the present-tense, so I'll make sure to work on double checking those :-). Thanks for leaving a review!
1 [Report This]Date: December 16, 2025 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day
Welcome to MTT and congrats on your first fic! Super cute start, and loved the meet cute and the Beesly numberplate! Really like the idea of the documentary being set in college - I don't think I've seen that before. Also really like the idea of Kelly and Ryan as Pam and Jim's roommates.
Looking forward to what's coming next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :-)