1 [Report This]Date: March 29, 2023 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
You got what went through Pam’s mind there just right!
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, I vividly remember being a wreck that day at work! And I was just waiting for a TV show!
1 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2020 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh God. This is a really poetic look into Pam's mind in the run-up to The Merger, but jeez does this hurt.
"A treasure, all she had that he'd touched besides herself." YES.
Author's Response: I remember being unable to sit still this day, so I transferred my nervous energy to Pam. We’d seen the promo with them hugging and... yeah, it hurt a lot. I’m not sure I’m over it, heh.
7 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
But he wasn't home. Not yet. It would take like seven months before he really would be back.Seven long months.
But this - (really you, finally you, only you, always you). - kind of rocks.
Author's Response: I know, it took FOREVER. But we got there in the end. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2007 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just beautiful. It's short, but you say so much with the repitition and with the extra bits in the parentheses... I absolutely love this. Gorgeous.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was fun to work in a little bit of a non-standard structure.
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2006 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved this. So simple and yet so effective.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2006 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, especially this part "(really you, finally you, only you, always you)"
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. So few words. Such big impact. We're not worthy.
Author's Response:
Whoa, thanks! I'm glad it worked out- I was so nervous I could barely sit still to type it.
9 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh. You win! I wish I could pack as much into so few words. Lovely, lis! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks, but it's no contest! And you're welcome- we have to stick together through these bleak, angsty days!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmmm, tasty fic. The rhythm of your writing was just so lovely! I'm not sure what I preferred because it was all great!
Author's Response:
It's so short there's not a lot to choose from! :)
Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gah! Just when I thought I couldn't be any more excited and freaked out for tonight's episode!
"She wrapped her arms around him and wasn’t sure whose heartbeat she could feel." That is a lovely turn of phrase. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I'm totally freaked out. Let's ratchet up that tension some more, shall we? Hee.
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Lis. I'm telling you - it's like GWH all over again. I downed a glass of wine before the cold open was over.
This was so sweet and lovely - and the image you created completely matches the expression on her face.
SIGH.
Author's Response: I'm a nervous wreck. I'm not sure if writing this helped or not, but the nice reviews are certainly appreciated. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw! This made me do something that's opposite a gasp, and make and "aw!" face. Short and evocative - nice :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you!
Date: November 16, 2006 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was insane it was so beautiful. Fantastic work. I agree with Girl7, this line killed me: "really you, finally you, only you, always you."
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I think "insane" and "beautiful" should always go together. I'm glad you liked it so much!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, no. I'm a goner.
a treasure, all she had that he’d touched besides herself
Gorgeous. Lyrical. So touching. You're killing me.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. "Lyrical" is a lovely compliment, especially from you! Sorry about the killing, though. Hee.
Date: November 16, 2006 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I didn't think I could get more keyed up for 8:36 pm, but then you had to go & post this!!
Did not expect that. /Pam
Author's Response: "Keyed up" is it exactly. I'm a nervous wreck! We're in this together! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely!
Author's Response: Hee, that's the spirit! (thank you!)
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, lis. Now I'm even more excited for tonight!
Author's Response: I'm too busy to be writing fic today, bel! I just couldn't sit still until I got this out!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Simply beautiful. Thank you for this.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful, just beautiful. For some reason, this line really got to me: really you, finally you, only you, always you
Absolutely. Let's all just remember that. Sigh.
Author's Response: Sigh. Yes. It has to work out eventually, doesn't it? Thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
blazed out through her cheeks ... drummed along her fingers
Yes, exactly. Love the pulse of this. Makes the tummy squirrely, though!
Author's Response: I've been squirrely for two days now- it's only fair that Pam is too, right? Hee. Thank you!