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Reviewer: FictionInReality Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2007 06:43 am Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

I died reading this. Died. I laughed so hard I thought I was gonna fall over. Perfect.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 09:09 am Title: Labor Relations

I'm not sure if I have ever commented on this story but I wanted to tell you how much I love it.  It's one of the sweetest things I've ever read.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 05:36 am Title: Labor Relations

How did I not tell you how much I adored this chapter??

Well.  I'm telling you now.  :)

Love pranking Jill - and the way you have the two of them both being so turned on by the prospect of a prank is exactly why Jim and Pam being together for realsies will work beautifully.

Never, ever finish this story.  EVER. :)

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 12:31 am Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

My wife, ladies and gentlemen. Is she hot or is she hot?

That was so funny! I can imagine it as a talking head. amazing! Aww lol another brilliant chapter. I can't stop smiling. You could write the Office! In fact you should send in some of your stories. This was SO cool. 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 09:25 am Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

Wow, Dwight reached new levels of crazy in this one, and I love how they responded. Jill the prankster is amazingly awesome :)

Author's Response: new levels of crazy. roflmao...Yes indeed. Thanks so much for the review Semby!!!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 07:16 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

Ooooooh, pranks as foreplay!  Love love love this latest chapter.  As always!  And too many hilarious moments to mention them all.  But seriously... I would say you've outdone yourself, but then I remember the genius of the first 13 chapters!

Author's Response: Aw...Mcmuffins you're the sweetest. And of COURSE the pranks were foreplay...always were! Well at least that's how I always looked at them. lol

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 08:25 am Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

holy cow... this is genius. jill is a genius. and was it just me or did you have The Last Mimzy in the back of your mind while you wrote this?

Author's Response: You know, I haven't seen the Last Mimzy actually so I didn't have that in mind....Why are they similar in some way? Other than their connection via Rainn of course. I'm curious now. Thanks so much for the feedback StarShine!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 06:42 am Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

oh. MY. goodness!!! that was hilarious! i love that Jim and Pam still have that banter between then and they can still pull off an AMAZING prank together. now with Jill in the mix, they're an unstoppable team :) seriously, this was too funny. this is an awesome chapter. 

Author's Response: Absolutely an unstoppable team! Jill is like the third amigo! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 05:49 am Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

You know I LOVE this series...but this chapter? Borders on brilliant (and that is not a term I throw around lightly.) It captures the essence of what was so great about S2, and seamlessly integrates the whole, fantastically detailed marriage/baby world you've created. Jim, Pam, Dwight - they all come through as if I were actually watching an episode. A great one. This made me more excited for S4 (when hopefully, we'll get more of the Jim/Pam pranking stuff, if sans Jill) more than any NBC promo ever could. Don't ever end this series. Seriously. 

Author's Response: Aw, Colette you are the best. Thank you so much for such for saying this. You know, I just have to believe that the writers will come through for us, in giving up the notion that Jim and Pam can't be funny as a couple. Every time I sit down to write a chapter of this story, I'm out to prove otherwise....even though the people who think it can't happen aren't reading it. lol. Anyway, thanks for the thoughtful review. Believe me, it's readers like you who make me never want to end this thing....we'll see how long it lasts before it becomes the crap fluff it should have been. lol

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 10:17 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

Why do I love the idea of them getting turned on by pranking?  It definately makes season 2 verrrry interesting.

you are hilarious.  I loved this chap 



Author's Response: hahaha, that's how I always liked to think of Season 2...foreplay. lol. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Wendy Blue Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 09:41 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

So this was beyond brilliant.  Really.  I love the idea of Jill inheriting prank genes, and the actual prank itself was hysterical.  This was one of your best yet, bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you Wendy Blue! So glad you enjoyed this one. I always have a good time writing this story, but this last chapter I have to say was one of my favorites to write so I'm so glad people enjoyed it and got just as much amusement out of it as I did. 

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 08:54 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

Her first prank....sooooooooooo adorable

 

I was wondering when we'd get another installment of this and I'm so glad that that was it....so precious!  Thanks for updating! 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!! I'll try and update soon!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 08:30 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

Such fun.  Perfect characterization...almost unfair that long with you perfect Pam and Jim you can bring in other characters as you choose and have them spot on as well.  Great stuff.

Author's Response: ;-) Thanks so much Brokenloon. What an awesome comment! After reading the Newlywed Game though, I'm pretty certain you have the same thing going!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 07:31 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

I love every chapter of this story.  You have captured Jim and Pam so well and their baby experience is so realistic.

Can't wait for more! 

 



Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!!!! Hopefully inspiration will strike and there will be more soon. :-)

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 06:31 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

So funny!  I was laughing at the talking bobblehead.  You really know how to write them (all the characters).  This story is amazing and just perfect.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks StarryDreamer. I'm glad you had a good time reading this!! It was certainly fun to write!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 06:09 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

Yes, humping day and hump day are two totally different meanings. Although both sound dirty in my mind. I remember the first time I heard hump day was in 8th grade when my teacher wrote it on the board. Of course, all of our minds were in the gutter, and we couldn't believe a TEACHER wrote that on the board. After about a month, we realized what it meant.

So true...
But she just didn't know what she wanted. That fact left him feeling a little annoyed to be honest. Left him feeling like....Well, what else is new Pam Beesly...Halpert.

And the Dundie award for person most likely to set up their own prank is...Dwight K. Shcrute! Way to dig your own hole!
Dwight.... ah, Dwight. You capture Dwights Dwightyness so well, it is enjoyable. And he would... I mean, totally he does set up himself up. All those pranks he really did just have coming.

I love baby noises. If I can forget how annoying babies can be and just focus on their cuteness. Like their laugh. I spent the morning with my favorite 22 month old, and he is just a laugh riot. All I gotta do is look at him and he knows something is up and he starts to laugh. Its so much fun.... But I do admit, some of thier sounds do sound a bit alien like. Even when you know what they are saying. There is very little difference between ba for book and ba for ball. And pain is plane. And mo is more. We is where... I have a whole translation for sounds... and that is only like half of the sounds he makes. The rest, only he knows.

That was so wonderfully Stanely!!!!!

Well if that wasn't the best information he'd gotten all week. He was going to print that out and make a banner to put over Jill's crib. Babies Time Travel Too
So wonderful!!!!

Two minor things:
waist - should be waste
and I think its feng shui
 
(wow, I almost wrote part of this review in my letter to Red Cross.... so, either you would get a list of dates I am going to teach, or they would get a weird list like this... I don't know which would be worse).


Wow, I stopped writing comments because I would have to comment on the sheer genius that was each line... I totally was laughing and smiling and it was just great and everything awesome... its like Pink the color and Pink the singer.




Author's Response: hahaha. Love that you're reading Baby Talk silmulaneously as writing a letter to the Red Cross. So good! I always wonder how I should feel when people tell me I'm getting Dwight's "Dwightiness" down. Flattered, appalled? hahaha. Thanks so much for the always thoughtful responses EmilyHalpert. You rock.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 06:03 pm Title: The Family That Pranks Together...

Oh, wonderful!  I love the prank, and how Jilly cooperates (instinctively, maybe), and how Dwight is clueless as usual.  I loved Dwight running from accounting to soothe the Bobblehead.  Very funny.

Author's Response: hehe. No doubt Jill has pranking instincts. It's in her blood for God's sake. lol Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2007 12:40 am Title: Mother's Day

Wow, that's all I can really say. I loved this entire series, I couldn't pull myself away even when I was at my desk supposedly working (shhh secret). I just loved everything. Bravo



Author's Response: hehe, something about causing people to be delinquent from their jobs really makes me smile. :-)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Mother's Day

LMAO! Jim and breast milk... wow. So.... just great!

"I love so much about the things Monopoly chooses to be." :D!!!!!
"Stop snorting cocaine and read to your child once in awhile ok? Jeez. So tired of this." wow... so great

I can't believe I went a month without being able to read this story. Seriously, it is so amazing and great, I can't heap the praise on it enough.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2007 02:00 pm Title: In The Still of the Night

I loved this but I hated it.. just because of the subject matter of course. it was so... great.
Amazing.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2007 01:50 pm Title: Dear Jill

Yay! I get to read this story again... stupid broken computers and finals. They both deserve to die. My computer is a devil butt. It truly is!

Jill shares my middle name! Its a great middle name, I know!

This is the cutest thing ever!!! Although I will say, that note about the teddy bear... it sounds oddly like my neighbor Marc...

And it wasn't the first Dwight reference unless they were out of ordered, cause he sid Dwight would kill the first boy to make Jill cry.

It smells like apple juice here. That is random, but it is totally invading my sense of smell.

Wow, that last letter.... so scary.

I can't choose which I like best. This is all so wonderful

 

And it still smells like apple juice. 

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 08:23 am Title: Labor Relations

Just found this website and wanted to let you know your story is great.  I love each and every update!!!!

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 05:33 am Title: Mother's Day

Aww I can totally imagine Pam crying her eyes out at this. Jeez he's the perfect guy!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Mother's Day

Aw!  All KINDS of aw!!! And all kinds of awesome.  I LOVE daddy!Jim - he's so funny!  Jill's a pleasant girl when you shake her - ha! hahahahahahahaha.  And the stuff about Michael, and that whole entry with the hip to Jill's game.... I'm giggling like a madman.  Madwoman?  At work.  So, either way, giggling is maybe not the best thing to be doing, but I can't help it!  Have I ever mentioned that I love this story? ;)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Mother's Day

Awww, that *was* a good gift! I love how well you convey that he loves both his girls SO MUCH. :)

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