8 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2006 05:08 pm Title: March
Oh Pam, tell him. I love drunk Jim
8 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2006 07:37 am Title: March
“Sometimes I don’t get Karen.” - I really like the way you're turning the tables, making 2007 a mirror image of what 2006 was.
Date: November 26, 2006 06:56 am Title: March
Wow...parallel to the Booze cruise in some odd way.
Poor Jim. Dammit Pam say what you feel!!
=-(
Great story.
10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2006 05:26 pm Title: February
I wish I'd stumbled upon this story when the whole year was done, b/c I just want to keep reading! I sense your creativity and humour shining through, and I hope you post more months soon.
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 12:10 pm Title: February
Have a good day, Dawn.
That was awesome! Great chapter. I hope Karen chokes on those flowers too and dies.
8 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 06:32 am Title: February
That was sweet
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 04:04 am Title: February
Ah, Dawn! Nice callback.
Well, I should say I like the idea of this: a lot. It's cute, and I must say I love the idea of Pam taking a chance, finally, because she has to, and she needs to earn Jim [as much as that sounds like Jim's a trophy or something]. And I loved this chapter: Kowabunga, Valentine! I can completely imagine all of these, because they're pretty much in character for most of them [Michael!Andy!Jim!Pam!]: the only ones that got me, a little, were Dwight and Angela [because I don't think they'd make out in the middle of the office, even though that was pretty awesome to imagine] and Karen. The giggle thing? I don't know, maybe it's just me that doesn't think that'd be the kind of thing she'd do...I see her more as a chuckle or laugh-out-loud sort of person.
But then again that's just me being slightly dorky.
Otherwise, definitely a story I'm going to keep track of!
8 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 10:07 am Title: January
sounds interesting so far.
6 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 08:51 am Title: January
This was a great start! You've really got all the characters' voices down.
If you don't mind a teeny bit of constructive criticism: I noticed that while most of this is in the past tense, you slipped into present tense a few times. Also, in Angela's talking head, where you used "in promptu" I think you meant "impromptu"
Author's Response: I know, that bugged me too, but I did it at 2am, and for some reason wanted to really get it out. I promise the tenses will be the same from now on.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 06:25 am Title: January
Awww. I seriously cried there. You are amazing. Man, if I were Pam, it'd have kicked Jim's indecisive butt by now. But, luckily...Anyway, you're fantastic. Never stop!