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Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2006 03:47 pm Title: French

how the tip of her tongue had briefly touched his while he kissed her against his desk in the dark.

YOWSA! Wow, that is hot. 

“Jim Halpert,” he says aloud. “You are such a girl.” 

And that's why we love him. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was trying to cheat a way for there to be canon French kissing.

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2006 03:44 pm Title: Sign Language

I meant to only read the first couple of parts for now, but could not stop. You really got the characters down. And I love how you re-invented the parking lot scene...so much better your way! And what a sweet, sexy ending. Thanks for this!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you, Colette!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2006 03:42 pm Title: Elvish

loading his Trans Am’s sun visors with the leftover paper dots from every single three-hole punch in the entire office

OMG this is hilarious! Wonderful! 

madwTr

I don't actually think that's "Dwight" in Tengwar. It would look more like "ppwjp". At least if transliterated. I'm assuming you didn't actually translate it into Quenya. BTW, "Pam" would look remarkably like "Pm" when transliterated into the Tengwar system.

Oh, God, I'm channelling Dwight. 

With a quick glance around to check that no one is watching, he allows his head to drop to the top of hers, her hair warm and soft against his cheek

Squee!!! Lovely.



Author's Response:

Eh... I don't know anything about Elvish. I guess you can tell. I actually got these from an online translator and since my keyboard doesn't use the Elvish alphabet, I tried to convey what Jim and Pam would think it looked like.

Thanks for the squee!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2006 03:37 pm Title: Sign Language

FYI: It's "martial law". :)

 

Love her sniffing him. 



Author's Response: Whoops. Thank you! I fixed it so I don't embarrass myself in front of anyone else.

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