1 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2022 01:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Marvellous imagery and prose. An incredible glimpse into this popular episode. Wel done!
1 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2019 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Su beautiful!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2006 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so sad, but so sweet and beautiful. I've got tears in my eyes after reading this.
10 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2006 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how I missed this fic when you published it a few months ago. What a wonderful Jim inner monologue. Gave me the chills.
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2006 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not sure how I missed this one, but it gave me butterflies in my tummy. Very very wow.
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2006 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1
really nice for your first jim/pam fic!!
9 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2006 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
What lovely prose. The word "angst" was made for stuff like this. Beautiful!
8 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2006 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely. Great first fic, I'm anxious to read more from you.
8 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2006 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, how bittersweet. Jim's uncertainty about the near future with Pam is heartwrenching.
Date: July 14, 2006 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely & sad. This line was so poignant:
"He doesn't want to break her. His heart sinks at the thought that maybe he has."
8 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
You've created a great moment here.
6 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2006 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Some very pretty imagery in this.