10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2006 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1
It never fails to astonish me, how you can pack so much into so few words:
This is a metaphor that his roommate Mark came to know well, with Jim’s response to questions about his day often being a simple, “Parking lot,” and an accompanying grimace.
9 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2006 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Again - gorgeous. Also: innovative. Love it when authors come up with something truly original. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2006 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This is really interesting. I love these 5 points things and this one is one of the best, I think my favourite is IV -- just seems so true to life, but they are all really really good. Thanks for sharing. ;)
8 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2006 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1
"Jim’s response to questions about his day often being a simple, “Parking lot,” and an accompanying grimace." - I particularly loved this line. It can't really say why, it just jumped out at me.
7 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2006 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
"This is a metaphor that his roommate Mark came to know well, with Jim’s response to questions about his day often being a simple, “Parking lot,” and an accompanying grimace."
Fabulous. Love every word of the last section. Thank you.
8 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2006 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Love it! I also love how V. can also be seen as a little bit dangerous, which is exactly how it should be: electricity and danger and love.
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2006 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, these were beautiful! The Karen one gave me goosebumps!