Reviews For Illusions
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Reviewer: Courteney Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2007 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1

i absolutely adore this.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2007 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1

That's some metaphor you've got there.  We all know how well that works out for him...

Reviewer: kyrafic Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2006 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, nice.

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really liked this analogy.  I can see that in Jim's mind, visions of him & Pam in love (instead of just him in love with Pam) would be fleeting like this--something you could see if you were squinting, but that he's much more sure of his relationship with Karen.  You captured his thoughts really well :)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

"nothing" is a euphamism for Pam, right? Love when fics make a parallel between childhood and now.

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2006 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice thoughts.  I love the comparison.

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