1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2018 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This is so sad but so well done. Those last couple of lines are really gut-wrenching and crushing, but, man, I could see it happening that way. Thank you for this.
9 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2007 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well that's heartbreaking. Poor Pam.
I think Karen will be the one to go postal on everyone once the whole thing with Jim and Pam blows up in her face. But that's just me.
Date: December 07, 2006 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ow. Ow ow ow ow. Those last two paragraphs just hurt so good.
9 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Again - awesome. Love the progression of the cameramen.
9 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sad...very realistic, however. I have a feeling your ending is probably quite close to what we'll end up getting for Christmas from the writers. Bah, humbug!
6 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 07:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the mug at the end and the fact that Jim is so non-chalant about it.
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2006 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, wow. That was so incredibly sad, yet beautiful!
9 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
An empty teapot. Omigod, I think it or my heart just broke. A good small dose of melancholy *sigh*
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good. The last line left me breathless.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: November 28, 2006 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the way you wrote Pam's thoughts here. She's never quite self-aware, but she does have an awareness for the camera. I could see her thinking about what people would think of her actions and I liked the way you made the reactions slide from sympathy to judgement to pity--if Pam never acts, that would probably be my progression as well.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's the progression I seem to be feeling right now. Who wouldn't pity Pam after The Merger? :( Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2006 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This made me sad for both Pam and Kelly - and made me want to kick Ryan's butt.
Author's Response: I have to say, I have that urge too sometimes. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: November 28, 2006 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely -- so sad, but so likely. And the Christmas mug is a great touch. Tellingly generic.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: November 28, 2006 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
one morning they’ll walk in and Dwight’s desk will be in a giant bowl of jello
Oh. My. God. Someone HAS to write this.
Thanks for this story. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Hahaha, maybe I will... it is a pretty funny image. Thanks!
Date: November 28, 2006 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good. Liked the darkness of it. Wished it had been longer. Perhaps you could write a continuation? :)
Author's Response: I don't have one in the works right now, but maybe in the future... Thanks for the encouragement!
Date: November 28, 2006 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good, sad but good. The cameramen have to have an opinion by now (I know I would).
Author's Response: Oh, they must. Especially when they capture the things that the characters themselves don't really know have been captured. Thank you for the review.