Date: September 09, 2007 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1
i am quite amazed you were able to cut this from 1900 words to just over 100 and still leave it as amazing at it is. its so good with the call back from boys and girls and he so does still feel it, and she took a chance and called him on it. and so good. and the perfect midday distraction (i figured i would fail my class if i tried to read some of your other stories)
Date: December 04, 2006 06:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Short and sweet. Loved it!
Date: December 04, 2006 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1
As I mentioned before, I've been curious to see what you'd do with a drabble - or something drabble-ish. My instinct was correct - you SO had it in you. And very impressive editing job (an almost 1800 word reduction - that's bloody!)
What he wanted.
Truer (or sexier) words were never spoken. Sometimes all it takes is four (!) of them.