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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2017 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

Awwww. I love competitive Pam! And snuggly, sleepy Jim and Pam. I think every single person knew exactly the look he had when he looked at her, sleeping on his shoulder. This is so lovely!

Reviewer: Pam-Pong Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2008 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

omg me LOVES me some fluff

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2008 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

Thanksgiving isn't big at my house. We live so far from any relatives that its always just us. We've had an odd grandparent down here some years, but it always seems strange to have more than just the four (now three) of us. I remember growing up, and even now reading these stories, the rest of my family all lives up north. They do have these huge family get togethers. And I always wished I was a part of it. But I also know that if I was up there, it would be strange and uncomfortable for me.
/ramble.

Lets see - Jim with bed head in worn grey tshirt, pajama pants, and barefoot. Excuse me while I daydream.
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
(whoa, also, right now, really really pretty sunset outside)

I always help my mom with the cooking. Me and brother both have to make dinner once a week, but I actually don't, because I help with dinner 6 nights a week. I just claim one night as a meal I made.

You don't need coffee for a double major. You only need it if you plan on having a life also. And since I decided that having a life was totally not important, I survived on fanfic alone.

Wow. Pam would look awesome in that outfit /girlcrush.

Now those muffins sound so yummy. I happen to love both banana nut and chocolate muffins... yum

Come on Jim and Pam. Sure you might think you are comfortable each on your own side, but you know you would be happier cuddling up together.

Damn then you go and dress Jim in green. Green does wonders for him.

Okay, just the idea of the two of them on the chair and then Pam getting sleepy - warms my heart. I so want a Jim.

Ya know, I just did a real life break, checking emails, and it just blew my mind that it isn't Thanksgiving time. This story put me so much into that mindset I really was like, "oh, wait, its feburary"

Aww, the idea of Pam.... okay, just that entire Pam and Jim sleeping in that chair and its just so perfect and happy.

Thats how I play. Its not over util I'm winning. But somehow its not as much fun when you are competeing against mom.

They kissed they kissed they kissed they kissed they kissed. Seriously so happy right now.

Reviewer: dramaqueen22 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23, 2006 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

I don't even know how to respond to this. I got butterflies in my stomach with the description of Jim and Pam falling asleep in the chair together. This chapter was adorable and heartwarming, only made better by the fact that Thanksgiving happens to be my favorite holiday. It made me both happy for them, and sad that I don't have a Jim, but what can you do. Fantastic job.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 22, 2006 11:58 am Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

You did a wonderful job of setting the scene for Jim and Pam. There's so much detail, that the small moments between them feel real. And of course, falling asleep in the chair together was very cute.

Author's Response: excellent - thanks for the compliments.  I know it was a long chapter, but I think there was no way to get around that without losing something!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2006 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

wow...i am up too late...but i couldn't stop reading...what an interesting perspective..

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2006 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

I thought this was lovely! I loved the Halpert family and the way Pam fit in.

 

I have one very minor gripe, and that is that you don't need a corkscrew to open champagne -- you just pop the cork right off. Much more fun that way!

 

All in all enjoyable and wonderful. Thanks! 



Author's Response: You know - you are so right!!  Talk about missing the obvious!  I shall go back and fix that.  Thanks for reading and for pointing that out!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2006 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

AWWWWWWW OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE Larissa Halpert! Never has a mother-son fanfiction story touched me so! You really roped me into this story like it was an actual episode of the show. Thank you so much for writing this! It's the perfect story for the holidays! 

One of my favorite lines:

"Hey, uh you going to dress like that for the parade?" She asked, as nonchalantly as she could.

Reviewer: Ami17han Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2006 08:04 am Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

All the little moments were priceless. Well done! It's amazing how close this is to my own family's Thanksgiving rituals - the parade, all sorts of family members in the house, too much alcohol, Trivial Pursuit & Yahtzee,Good Lord, other people plays these, too? Loved it!

Reviewer: Chicgeek Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2006 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

That was just, wow, just, sooo cute. I'm sorry but it's not everyday we get to read about Jim and Pam being HAPPY together. Hurray for meddling moms! Muffins? Awesome. "Put your arm around her silly"? Awesome-r. This is a well written piece of much-needed fluff. PLEASE update!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2006 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

I love Larissa! She's an enabler...all she needs to do is push those in the right direction, and they take over. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2006 10:13 am Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

I love this chapter and not just because I want to curl up and take a nap with Jim... I love Thanksgiving, I love the whole tone of Pam becoming immersed in Jim's family, I love your point about them connecting because they were in a different environment. I wish they would get together on the show outside of work with their new dynamic and let the magic happen! Maybe Jim's mom will show up and lend a hand! Lovely work, Moxie.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2006 08:18 am Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

What a wonderful chapter. I don't know if I'd likea meddling mom like Larissa but I like what she does for Jim.

Author's Response: thanks - I tried to make her helpful, but realistic.

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2006 07:01 am Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

Awwwwww!  That was awesome!  Thank you, Moxie!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jonah5!  I appreciate you taking the time to comment!

Reviewer: neptune1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2006 12:06 am Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

I love this so much.  This chapter was unbelievably sweet (even more so because of all the lovely family interaction), and I think you did a great job communicating the situation from Larissa's perspective.  Hmm, I wish there was some way to get a chapter from Jim's perspective at the end?  You know, behind closed doors? ;)

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2006 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

Hands down, this is the best story ever. And I'm not just saying that because I'm reading this chapter in my blue and grey paid pjs (complete w/ faded grey sweatshirt). I just love the outsider's point of view, but since it's Jim's mom it gives the whole story a wonderful kind of intimacy as well.
Although, I can't help but be a little sad for Karen. But she's a big girl, she'll get over it.
Also, I love the Halperts. Seriously. Just great. Thanks for that.
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: shaebay Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2006 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

that was absolutely adorable. nice to see their relationship from another perspective.

Reviewer: shaebay Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2006 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

that was absolutely adorable. nice to see their relationship from another perspective.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2006 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

Oh moxie, the image of them falling asleep together in the chair? I actually said 'aw' out loud. Seriously. This is like an early valentine. (So there has to be a chapter coming up called 'What She Didn't See', right?)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2006 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

What a warm and sweet chapter. And most definitely not boring at all!  I just loved it and can't wait to read what happens next. Until then I will bask in the glow of love reignited!!

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2006 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3 - What She Sees

First of all, I want to go to Thanksgiving at their house next year.

Second of all, I loved the line "I think he'd follow her into hell, much less an outlet mall the day after Thanksgiving."  Yeah, that's love!

I liked all the details.  Great chapter!

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