Date: April 14, 2007 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah, wonderful. Reminds me of The Notebook, although it's certainly not a duplicate of that famous kiss in the rain. But something about the mood or tone reminds me of that lovely moment. Thanks for this!
Author's Response: You know, it's funny you mention that, because I wrote the story before I saw the movie, and when I finally did see the movie it made me want to go back and look at the story again. I just love the idea of people in love kissing in the warm summer rain. Makes me smile. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: January 14, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whew. So glad this was re-posted... and so sorry I missed it the first time around. You did a lovely job building up this kind of tension where they're both afraid that this isn't really happening. Yay.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 14, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just reread this story for the first time in a while. I just love the slow build to such a beautiful moment. And the first time I read this, I didn't notice the parallels of what they're both thinking/feeling- feeling like they can't breathe, being afraid that it's a dream, etc.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing - and for rereading! I'm happy you like it.
Date: September 20, 2006 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Sorry I missed this before! WOW!!! Amazing work:)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 20, 2006 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how I missed this when you first posted it...it's amazing. You capture just a few minutes but you delve all the way into them, making the reader hear and feel and taste the emotions of this moment as well as the physical details. Wowza!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: September 10, 2006 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
just incredable!! this is one of the best fics i've read!! amazing!! awesome job! you use such beautiful words. gah, i can't tell you how much i love this!! =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that review! I know it was a while ago, but I do appreciate it and thought I should say so. :)
Date: July 17, 2006 02:57 am Title: Chapter 1
As everyone has already said, this fic is so beautiful and romantic. Your description is eloquent and moving. My favorite line: "twin pillars of hope and fear and love." Adding to my favorites.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's one of my favorite lines, too. I'm glad you liked the story. :)