1 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2021 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know which hurts most. Meredith? Phyllis? Toby? Really appreciate you finishing this was a hint of brighter things to come for Jim and Pam. Really well done ensemble piece.
Date: May 15, 2008 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
The bit about Meredith really touched me. Very nice work.
Date: November 27, 2007 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how I missed this last year! This was absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking. You've got 'bittersweet' down pat! I especially loved Toby's and Creed's almost made me tear up a bit.
This is lovely, thank you for writing it.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAHHHH!! who's calling pam!??!
like everyone else, i'm going to imagine it's jim :) otherwise...poor, poor meredith, and toby! goodness...he should've gotten custody of sasha.
Date: November 09, 2007 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the ending (and if Jim isn't who's calling, then I'm going to pretend it is :] )
Date: January 28, 2007 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1
My god, how depressing...I love it!!!
Date: January 21, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
His smile disappears. His ex-wife took everything from him.
Shattered my heart. So freakin' sad. Nice work.
9 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2006 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this, it was a nice mix of the bitter and the sweet. It's good for me once in awhile to be reminded that there are other characters besides Jim and Pam on the show...although the last line had my shipper heart smiling.
Date: December 25, 2006 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was simply amazing. Almost a little too sad but still amazing. I love Pam's line:She thinks Jim would say something like that. She knows he would. It is just so sweet and true! He so would.
I really like how you characterized Michael, perfect mix of funny and touching. In fact, this fic is set up very nicely, you intermingled the funny sections with the sad, just like the show does so it really worked.
This is such a great ensemble piece and I hope you do more!
Date: December 24, 2006 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was so poignant and beautiful. loved it. and that better have been jim calling pam at the end.
Date: December 24, 2006 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the Dwight part. Perfect. The rest of it just made me soooooooooooo sad. But I'm a fluff-lover at heart, so it's probably just me.
Date: December 24, 2006 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I felt so badly for Phyllis and Toby. And I guess it wasn't Jim calling Pam since he was with Karen and said he wasn't going to call Pam.
Author's Response: Maybe he caved? ;)
8 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2006 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I read this three times in a row. Each character is written perfectly, you did such a great job with all of them. I laughed at Dwight, and felt so sad for Meredith. I do have to say that I liked Pam's best, because this line? She thinks Jim would say something like that. She knows he would...is so very true. And the end was so sweet and hopeful.
Merry Christmas, and thank you for this!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Merry Christmas to you too!