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Reviewer: Thats what she said Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2022 09:27 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

I have now read all of your stories, and as it turned out, I saved the best for last. I loved this story and all of the attention and detail you put in it. Fantastic!

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2021 11:43 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

Loved this story a ridiculous amount! Great writing. You are rooting for them the whole way!

Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2021 12:03 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

I loved this story!

Reviewer: Donnamour1969 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2019 07:47 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

This was beautiful! Your talent amazes me!

Reviewer: Boysenberry Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2016 09:18 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

I loved this story so much. It was well thought out, and executed IC. Well done!

Reviewer: Gnrclln Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2010 11:47 am Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

I can not tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It was so beautifully written and just perfect.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2008 08:53 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

Lovely. I must say I didn't expect them to end up at a Star Wars marathon when I started this story. But the extended journal gift is amazing.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2008 10:37 am Title: On The Fifth Day of Christmas

I've been reading this piece so that I can read your new 12 Days one.  (I'm a completist like that.)  I had intended to just leave a comment at the end but I had to thank you for this portrayal of Karen.  It was so real and sympathetic and NOT bitchy and kind and understanding but still totally in character.  I never read anything like it back during this time in the series and I haven't read anything like it since.  Well done!

Reviewer: MoraDae Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2007 03:34 am Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

I know this story is a year old but I just found it (I'm working my way through all of your stories) and had to review it. This is without a doubt my absolute favorite Jim & Pam story. I am in awe of this, seriously. The detail and thought that went into the gifts was wonderful. I laughed, I cried. I'm having a hard time finding the words to tell you how much I loved this. And I want those ornaments, they sound gorgeous! You are an amazing and gifted writer. Thank you for sharing your gift. :o)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25, 2007 07:29 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

Moxie, I have spent the past two days reading your fanfic in little doses.  I know this is a year old, but it was so incredible.  I saw that you had a sequal to this and wanted to be "informed". 

Thank you for writing this amazing and beautiful story.

Reviewer: once_upon_a_jam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 11:33 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Damn Michael and his earliness!

Haha, when Jim asks if he has any "discriminating marks," I think you meant to say "incriminating."

 I am adoring this whole thing, madame moxie.

Reviewer: ammogirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 12:57 pm Title: On The Eighth Day of Christmas

So, I had to run and post this review immediately without even finishing the chapter...Lou Lou!  Oh my god!  It's my favorite perfume, I started wearing it as a teenager in England, and the last time I left there I brought back 4 big bottles...which ran out years ago.  And then not one month ago, I was returning to Germany from the States, and in the duty free shop, what do I find?  Cacherel's Lou Lou.

Oh, also, I love this story :) 

Reviewer: speedbumpsal Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 02:08 am Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

i'm pretty sure i started reading this five hours ago, it is past four in the morning right now, and i am seeing two of everything, and my back hurts, and i know i'm going to be feeling it tomorrow.... so i guess what i'm trying to say is, Thanks. It was wonderful.

Reviewer: gwgal Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 04:21 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

What a great idea - I love the pun of the Partridge family along with the note about how they got the song wrong.  Hee!  That's so sweet.  I can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 05:28 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

How in the world did I not leave a review for this story?!?   This is one of my very favorite stories.  I patiently waited for each chapter.  Okay, not so patiently.  This a beautiful story and it is awesome to see their love unfold in the way we all want it to.  Amazing job :)

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2007 06:48 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

I can't remember if I wrote a review once this was all done, but seriously one of my favorites - I would check every day for a new chapter. Perfect.

Reviewer: Jamster Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2007 10:30 am Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

This is the absolute epitome of a JAM story, and it is also absolutely my favorite story here. Everything is done perfectly which explains the fact that I read the entire thing in one sitting.

The dialogue seemed very smooth and never forced. I had no trouble at all picturing Pam becoming this independent and only wish it would happen on NBC in such a manner. The playful teasing of Jim and Pam was back in full force, and it felt very natural. The pacing wasn’t rushed, and moved along exactly as it should. I never found myself skipping ahead or trying to get through dull parts, as each chapter seemed more engaging than the last. What I also appreciate is how you portrayed Karen. It could have been easy to make her try to sabotage the relationship of Jim and Pam, but you didn’t. In fact, you had her understand, and even offer some words of advice to Jim. That removed any guilt I had for what Jim had done to her and let me focus on the true part: the JAM storyline of course!

After each chapter, I let myself further believe that Pam was the secret admirer, but there was still always that small shred of doubt. Fortunately, she was, and the ending became phenomenal. The fact that Pam was that in love with Jim that she gave him the ring as a sign of commitment really finished off the story in a fantastic manner.

I also love the gift ideas, and their methods of delivery, and might find myself “borrowing” from them in the near future.

You took a modern romantic storyline and turned it into a classic. This has all the great ingredients of a classic love story, and one that I am sure to find myself reading far into the future. The smut was tasteful, as always, and what would a Moxie story be without any?

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 09:37 am Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

Epic but wonderful. Worth the wait. Thank you!

Reviewer: Claire Danes Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2007 06:22 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

I don't have too much time to read or write, but once I started reading this one there was no stopping.  I loved the characterization here - nothing felt off.  You have a gift!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23, 2007 07:30 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

I really liked this story a lot...I am so glad you wrote it...It was creative, well written and engaging...

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 03:01 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

just... wonderful. amazing. stunning. i LOVE it. definately one of my favorite stories here. the end is BEAUTIFUL with them all dressed up and everything being resolved. i could just feel the love between the two of them. you did such a great job being true to their characters. thank you SO much for this amazing story that kept me checking the Most Recent page for days! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 12:53 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

Oh my. So much to comment on here... it took me a few days to absorb it all!

Naked!Jim turning off the TV.  Naked!Jim making coffee.  Naked!Jim wearing just a ring on his left hand.

I have to agree with Jim -- Day 11 (in both chapters 11 and 12) was so terrific, I would have forgotten about day 12, too!

The Scrantonicity tape was so perfect as the day 12 gift!  Kevin was the drummer, right?  And the part about that afternoon being the last time things were 'normal' between them is soooo true.  (Yes, I've been wracking my brain trying to guess each day's gift).

And the reveal!  Seriously, you sent my heart right up into my throat.  Even on the second & third reading.  Wow.


Author's Response: lisahoo - you are the best fangirl ever!!!!   I always enjoy writing Jam stuff imagining your response to it.  :-)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 08:55 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

And it was all revealed just as it ought to have been! Very sweet ending :)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 08:15 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

Wow...you are completely and entirely awesome. I don't even have the words to describe how much I have loved reading this.  Just wonderful. :)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 08:09 pm Title: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

Excellent Excellent Excellent. Loved every chapter

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