Date: February 01, 2007 09:43 pm Title: The Beginning
I liked this a lot. One part I particularly enjoyed- the bit about Jim having the newspaper, but never actually reading it. Says a lot about his character, I think. Nice detail.
Author's Response: I've just done this way too many times myself. :) thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2007 10:28 am Title: The Beginning
great ending - it was worth the wait!!! :-)
Author's Response: glad you liked it -- especially enough to comment four times! :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2007 10:22 am Title: The End
I completely love the Pam turnaround - I think it's completely believable in that she's in shock that things might actually work out, and then she realises "OMG - I just walked away from *that*?" So she heads back to make the most of it. ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2007 10:13 am Title: The Party
Yay, Michael. Even drunk Michael. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2007 10:09 am Title: The Transfer
I'm sure I must have reviewed this before, but just in case - I really really hope Michael does give Jam a push. Maybe not this obviously, but something!! (Not that I don't like it your way - it's quickest!!) :-)
Date: January 05, 2007 06:18 pm Title: The End
So very romantic, except for the part about the snot. That was just funny!
Date: January 05, 2007 05:56 pm Title: The Party
Poor sad Karen. Funny drunk Michael. Shocked and elated Pam. All too wonderful for words!!
Date: January 05, 2007 03:14 pm Title: The End
lose and loose are different words.
Date: January 05, 2007 03:01 pm Title: The End
Ooh! I like that Pam returned at the end. Nice work!
Date: January 05, 2007 02:45 pm Title: The End
Yay! Scruffy!Jim -- how could Pam possibly leave that to go home!?! So glad there is more to come!
10 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 01:50 pm Title: The End
Sigh! So much to love about this chapter - and this story! Yay for Michael! Yay for Pam showing up and then coming back!! and double yay for scruffy!Jim!
Date: January 05, 2007 01:25 pm Title: The End
Go Pam. She went for it. It's about time
Date: January 05, 2007 09:49 am Title: The Party
Loved how you wrote drunk Michael. Just perfect.
Author's Response: You just know Michael is probably a rambling drunk, which makes it easier.
7 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2007 08:02 am Title: The Transfer
I like that Karen was very mature about the whole thing. She told Jim how it was in a very matter-of-fact sort of way, and I do believe that she wouldn't stick around after a blow like that.
Michael's known about the reason for Jim's transfer for some time, so it's only fitting that he'd let the ball drop in such a drastic way. We know he can only hold a secret in for so long. And he really thought he was doing the best for Jim, and in a way, he is. Of course it wasn't any of his business to do it, but Michael always recovers from being at his absolute worst in some of the best ways.
Jim is so in denial, though. I hope things get better for him!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm hoping Karen takes all of this maturely on the show. She's a little bitter for obvious reasons, but I tried not to make her hyper-sensitive about the situation. Thanks!
Date: January 03, 2007 03:26 pm Title: The Transfer
If only it could happen like this.
Author's Response: My fingers are crossed!
Date: January 03, 2007 02:30 pm Title: The Transfer
Gotta love Michael and his "never, EVER give up" scenarios, even if he has to orchestrate it himself. Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: It's always good to see Michael the Nice Guy come out sometimes, isn't it?
Date: January 03, 2007 02:27 pm Title: The Transfer
Oooo, this is great. I enjoy insightful Michael and totured Jim. I am looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: More is coming, I promise!
Date: January 03, 2007 12:36 pm Title: The Transfer
Any chance you're going to have Jim fight for Karen to stay and get all conflicted between Karen and Pam? Because I would love to read it...
Author's Response: Um...I don't want to ruin the story or anything, but my Magic 8 Ball says "Not Likely."
Date: January 03, 2007 12:26 pm Title: The Transfer
Squeeeeeee! I love this!! And may I reiterate the love of meddling Michael!
Author's Response: When he's good, Michael can be really good.
Date: January 03, 2007 11:15 am Title: The Transfer
Oh please, let this happen on the show, and SOON! BTW -- loooove Meddling!Michael! Can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: SOON indeed. Like next week. Please!
Date: January 03, 2007 11:11 am Title: The Transfer
ooooh! I would jump up and down in my seat over this, but I'm at work and they already think I'm strange! But I'm so glad you started this, and am really, really looking forward to the next installment!! Yay for interferring Michael!!!!!!
Author's Response: I promise to post more installments if you promise to finish My True Love Gave to Me. Like now.