9 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2007 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really out of the blue, but really hot. I'd like to know a little more what's going through their heads as this starts and progresses, rather than just what they're wishing for, but I figure it's not really the point of this short stand-alone. I guess maybe that's what I'm wishing for.
Author's Response: Good to know. Yeah, this one was just meant as a short Karen-POV fic, written for the Office_Romances challenge community at LiveJournal. Thanks for commenting!
10 [Report This]Date: January 07, 2007 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Jan's nails... it's the first thing I really noticed about her, the nails and the make up, yeesh. This is definitely hotter than any pam/girl pairing, just sayin'.
Author's Response: Thanks, lano! Yeah, her nails struck me as hard and brittle, even when the polish is a soft, pearly color. Worked for this story. Glad you liked it :)
Date: January 03, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how you repeated the "she wishes" and "so she could pretend" in each section and how the steaminess escalated.
Author's Response: Thanks for that, kaystar! :)
Date: January 03, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
That last line cracks me up
Author's Response: The original version was more heavy-handed. It didn't feel right, so I toned it down. :)
9 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2007 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yowza!
Author's Response: Hee. :)