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Reviewer: Sheppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 12:35 am Title: Chapter 5

I love love loved the concept of this story.  I love how Karen pointed out to Jim that Pam was lying.  Thanks for a great read!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2007 09:04 am Title: Chapter 5

Am crying. Loved it so much. So glad you finished this. Going to stop talking in fragments now.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2007 06:39 am Title: Chapter 5

Good ending.

Reviewer: Love Fool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

That was great! I loved him saying do-overs! lol. That's such a Jim/Pam thing to say. And when he said "if you could change anything about that night...would you?" Oh man, I literally gasped when he asked that! Good work!

Reviewer: rachelb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2007 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 4

YAY!! I'm really glad you wrapped this one up... My favorite line? "You get that she was lying, don't you?" Oh how I wish that line would be uttered on the show. And I love the idea of Casino Night footage being aired for the staff. Great job on this....you captured our beloved Pam and Jim so well. And that is one of my favorite T & S songs...so "addition by addition"!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

Sooo glad you came back and finished this!  And this is a believeable scenario in which Karen 'bows out' and actually is a catalyst for Pam & Jim.  Aw, jeez, they sooo belong together, it just drives me crazy!!

Reviewer: samsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 5

I am glad you finished this.  I would love to see the show when the documentary airs. 

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

My lord, SixFlightsUp, this is fantastic!  I've read fics before that are set after the documentary airs, but never one that sets the action sort of current while at the same time in light of the airing - what a great idea!  And it's delicious to think of the tension between poor Jim and Pam every time someone mentions that night. Guh.

Off to the next chapter - oh, and YES, please, please continue this!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think you need to write more, because this is good good GOOD!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 06:03 am Title: Chapter 3

WOw - I can't believe I haven't read this until today!  Great characterizations - you got their voices dead on.  :-)

Author's Response: That's such a huge compliment considering that I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the end of 'My True Love' and 'Distance Learning'! And I'm always worried about going overboard with characterization, so thank you so much!!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

So when are you going to send in your resume to the producers so they can hire you as a writer? I'll wait patiently.

LOVE this. Wish it would really happen. Like now. 



Author's Response: HA! Wow. Well, you know, I may have to soon if I keep ignoring the med school applications that I'm supposed to be working on to write this. Always nice to know I have a back up plan! ;-) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow.. this is great.. please, keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: Sheppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like this story.  I believe it's the first one I've seen where the documentary has aired.  Really like Jim standing up to Roy.  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

That was friggin awesome!!! :D Keep it up!!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yey, Jim stood up to Roy!! Poor Roy...and yey for Karen!
Can't wait for the next part.
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow Jim stood up to Roy. I love it.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

"But in that minute, when she was being brushed aside as inconsequential to the love story that seemed to be unfolding in front of them all, she wished that he knew she had some claim to the situation" - I absolutely loved this line. Poor Karen is truly a victim here and I can't help but feel sad for her.  Can't wait to see what drunk Roy is up to!

Author's Response: Yeah... I've been trying so hard to hate Karen and I just can't get there... It's really sad that no one's told her what she's getting in the middle of. Poor thing has no idea! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow - great beginning!  I can't wait to see the fall out from the viewing, especially from Karen.

Reviewer: Nestani Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hot damn! The documentary actually airing? Drunk Roy? I'm totally digging this fic...keep it going!

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

oh, my god, i love this story! I cannot wait until the next chapter. this is the only fic i every read where i feel really anxious to read the next chapter.....please dont make me wait too long. :)

Author's Response: That means so much to me! Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: shaebay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

you have to continue right away!

Reviewer: dapixam_q Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:33 am Title: Chapter 2

No. 1: thank you! for having the documentary air because that never happens and I love it.

No. 2: Michael is perfect. Good job!

No. 3: This is great. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: I'm blushing over here! Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much that means to me!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:26 am Title: Chapter 2

can't wait for the next chapter to see drunk Roy.

Author's Response: I'll try my best not to make you wait too long!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow that would be so cool if that happened.

Author's Response: And that right there is why there's fanfic:-) Thanks!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was excruiciating.  Well done.  P.S. posy = posse and loosing = losing. 



Author's Response: Ha. This is what happens when you can only spell with the help of spell check... But thank you!

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