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Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2011 07:16 pm Title: Uranus

Don't know if you're still out there but I just wanted to say I blew through all these series again tonight. It's hard to believe how much you pack into each of these little chapters. Your characterizations are dead on, great dialog, wonderfully interlacing plotlines. I just love them all.

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2010 07:30 pm Title: Mars

Christ, that was physically painful.

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2010 07:24 pm Title: The Moon

So much perfection in this short chapter. The refuge that is the bathroom. The synchronicity of their moods the way the moon controls the tides. This sums it up perfectly:

The next morning, she leans on the edge of Jim's desk, trying to let him know she needs him, without crossing a line she has etched in her conscience. He smiles up at her, and all the bad feelings are forgotten.

Reviewer: ImDissertating Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Uranus

As he sits down, Pam gives him an approving nod. It's almost as good as a kiss.

Oh, because it so is to him, isn't it? 

Author's Response: Yeah, Jim tends to take what he can get, at least in season 1/2. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2007 02:59 pm Title: Venus

Mmm, this was lovely. I think "Mars" may be my favorite even though it's the most painful, because the emotions just feel so vivid in that one. I love him telling her, "I just really want you to be happy." Aw. But I do love them being all playful and together and happy in the last two as well. That's a real treat. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Semby! Yeah, I have to say, Mars was my favourite to write. I got totally sucked into Jim, despairing in his shut up apartment and willing to move on, as long as she was happy. And you know there had to be a happy ending!

Reviewer: jamband Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Uranus

this story is proof that less is more. "Earth" is hot of course, but still, "Venus" where we're technically shown less come across as strangely hotter. I like.

Author's Response: Thanks! Venus came about because I've already written something MA and wanted to do something sexy without exposing too many body parts. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Venus

Nice.  You really captured the essence of everything that we love about Jim and Pam.  I liked this story as you took stuff from the past and turned it into an alternative future... I just wish there were there now, damn.  So annoying, real life is.  I like this fantasy better...

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, writing these was definitely an escape from reality.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Venus

Loved this. And the last chater is SO HOT.

Author's Response: Thanks, PuffingNoise!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Venus

God, I love these series of yours. This one had the pefect mix of elements (ahem, there's another theme for you). It was funny and sad and sexy and sweet and wistful and angsty and joyful in all the right places. Hard to choose, but I especially loved Mars - absolutely heart wrenching; and Venus - not only was it tres erotique (and I do mean tres,) but how Pam is so thrilled when Jim says they should go to Le Louvre so casually. Tiny moment, but perfectly illustrative of how they just get each other.

Oh, and candidate for best line in a fanfic: You're going to pop my girlfriend! 

Author's Response: Oh, yay, I'm glad the "erotique" actually reads that way! I just want these crazy kids to have fun. Thanks, colette, for the lovely comments (and suggestion)!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Venus

I love these different yet related series you give us. Please tell me you have many, many more in the works!

Author's Response: Thanks Luna! Colette has suggested "elements", so who knows?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Uranus

I love this whole series and your fill-in-the-blank scenarios.  Such a great piece of writing!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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