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Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2007 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Sad but sweet. Loved the ending.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

First it was beautifully sad and then it evolved into beautifully romantic. 

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful.  Love the pacing of it. 

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1

I have to say that this is beautiful.  I really enjoy reading stories that have sort of a poetic feel, and this is one of them.  I love the repetition of the "okay" line, it just fits perfectly every time.  I love how it helps to pace the story. 

And the ending, with Jim pulling the emergency stop?  Very, very hot.  I loved this.



Author's Response: Haha. I wrote this after watching Greys Anatomy and they seem to utilize the emergency stop to its fullest. And it is very hot.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, I like how there is very little dialogue in this -- Pam & Jim can do lots of things besides talk -- hee!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful.

Reviewer: mamzalini Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1

all about love. so great. poetic.

Reviewer: rebecca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1

this was beautiful

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1

He breaks away and looks at her and she can see the wall building up in his eyes. She should know, she is quite the expert at it.

Nice line. I love the repetition you use throughout; it gives this a great structure and a great rhythm. And the scenario? At the risk of being cheesy, it is "okay" with me.



Author's Response: Hahaha. Thanks. Not cheesy at all.

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