1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for a version of this kind of conversation where someone says a complete sentence beyond "I can't." So lovely.
5 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2016 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Meh. Jim/Karen was barely a month old at this point. He totally would have dropped her, faster than Katy, if Pam had only spoken up, or given any real sign that she wanted more than friendship.
9 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this!! As much as I wanted them to get together ASAP I appreciate that Jim was concerned with Karen's feelings. :) This was a great story.
Author's Response: thanks heartcaved! I'm glad you liked it :) I had fun writing it too! Thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: August 27, 2007 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
So here is the deal - finish your stories lady! You have SO many marked not complete, its insane. Okay, finish!
Oh Pam, it may be your fault, but fault isn't the right word. Its.... not fault. Its something else. (haha, can you beta this, I would highlight this reason and say think of better word here)
And uh, Jim, not as absurd as you may thing. Its all YOUR fault (there, fault is the right word there)
In so many ways, I hate but love that trapped feeling you get, like, you don't want the person to see you crying, but you secretly hope that sinc ethey are them, they will help you and you will feel better.
She did break up with Roy because of him, and it only took her a few (way too long and horrible) months to tell him for real.
:D. Karen will eventually deal with the fact that Jim's heart belongs to another. One with curly brown hair, and that wears pin striped shirts and answers the phone "dunder mifflin this is pam."
:D
Author's Response:
I KNOW! I have like 5 stories I'm working on. Gah. I need to just buckle down and work them. Ihave them all partially done and know where I'm going just... not done yet.
Thanks for pointing out the error, i appreciate the feedback. I guess I just have to get my stories EmilyHalpert approved before posting now don't I? Hee
Glad you liked ;) And Karen DOES just have to deal with it. And there's nothing she or anyone else can do about it. So blah.
Thanks for the review on an old story ;)
Date: January 17, 2007 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I really wish Jim had found her that day or at least heard she was crying.
Date: January 17, 2007 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1
yeah, there are tears in my eyes
amazing amazing
Date: January 16, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was really sweet, but you may want to look into a beta reader. there were a lot of punctuation errors (and a few spelling ones) that sort of stopped the flow of the story. just a suggestion :)
Date: January 16, 2007 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sad and yet so hopeful. I loved Jim noticing that her eyes had been less bright recently - and that they were now blinding him. I hope it doesn't take 6 months for Karen to get over him so they can get together!
9 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2007 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
very beautiful while still being realistic.. i loved it!
9 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this! It is more realistic....I like that the end isn't perfect, but it isn' t really depressing either! Good job!
Date: January 16, 2007 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, Pam might be able to wait forever, but I sure as hell won't!
Poor Karen, though. She's my fav new character.
Thanks for this!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: January 16, 2007 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh, I loved it! Please write more asap!
Date: January 16, 2007 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
that was beautiful, please continue! I wish it had been jim who found her sobbing