Date: April 03, 2010 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg i love the "He needed butterflies" i might need some of those too xd.
Date: February 26, 2007 11:41 am Title: Chapter 2
Ugh. I wish I didn't suspect that this is exactly what happened. Really well done. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the wonderful compliments! I really appreciate the review!
Date: January 17, 2007 08:29 am Title: Chapter 2
ooh I like the details of Jim 'filling his bed with random sluts' -- that is a new twist. And Karen as 'the perfect porn star' -- that (almost) makes it bearable for Jim to be having sex with her. Well, that and calling Pam's name. Hee! And the description of Pam & Jim's metaphorical bruises -- so rich.
Author's Response:
aww youre so nice!! thanks for that, I was worried that my bruises thing might have been cheesy and too forced, but if you say they were ok...then I believe you
:)
9 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2007 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2
i really enjoyed this, in that antsy kind of way that angst-ridden karen/jim/pam fics seem to always inspire. the way jim imagines pam in karen's place is so heart breaking and yet somehow hot at the same time and yes. i thought this was a great first fic :)
Author's Response:
yay my first review! thank you so much for the nice compliments and I like that you used the word "antsy" that is so what i was going for a dizzy sort of thing
thank you for making my night!!