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Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 05:23 pm Title: And They Lived Happily Ever After...

I loved when Jim said Pam was adorable...it was too cute.  I also loved the end of course..... you made me love Mrs. Beesely even more!  I loved this story if only this had really happened.  You did a great job with it!



Author's Response: Thank you! It was tough, but I had fun with it.  Glad to hear you did to.

Reviewer: Beth Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 05:19 pm Title: Good Morning

Aww, I love that Pam was pretending to sleep.   I also love the way you write Mrs. Beesley....Can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2007 07:51 am Title: A Bedtime Story

I loved the talking to each other via the story bit.  Very sweet.  I imagine they should have some happy dreams.  Nice work.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 10:19 am Title: Say Anything

I started giggling when Jim was talking about who would tuck him in.
Aww, this chapter ended to short... just when it was getting good (better)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Say Anything

Oh, this is so cute. I think my only complaint so far is that I would have liked to see how Jim interacted with Pam's mom during that first three hours, but that's only a minor wish and I can still hope that we'll see some of that since they're stuck there! The breakup and post-breakup-talk were handled well, and I'm enjoying where this is going. Great stuff!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 08:53 am Title: Say Anything

Lovely!  Update soon :)

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 07:56 pm Title: The Call

That was such a cute ending to the chapter!  I can't wait to hear about what all happens at their slumber party!! Oh, and I loved the part with Pam's mom.  Great job with this chapter!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07, 2007 06:48 pm Title: The Call

I like how you handled the break up...as long as Jim goes into detail with Pam at some point so WE get to find out what happened. Unless we could see the Karen/Jim convo from Jim's POV.

I'm enjoying this fic a lot! It's especially cool that it came out of what has been my favorite episode of the season so far. Looking forward to more! 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 05:07 pm Title: The Call

It did need to be done!

Reviewer: hoosier Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 04:54 pm Title: The Call

This is great, but let's get to the good stuff!!!  Sorry to be impatient, it is seriously good.

Author's Response: Keep in mind that this is a K rated fic!  But that said, the "good stuff" should be coming up in the next chapter...hopefully.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 11:33 am Title: Dinner And A Side Trip

I want more! Trapped in a snowstorm. Jam. Totally going to be wonderful

Reviewer: Beth Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Dinner And A Side Trip

aww...i love Jim meeting Pam's mom!  I am so excited to hear about them staying the night there, I can't wait.  I wish we could have heard more of the conversation between the three of them and i would love to hear her mom's thoughts about Jim.  Thank you for updating, please dont take so long next time!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2007 11:53 am Title: Dinner And A Side Trip

Pam, Jim, blizzard -- pure freaking magic!  You CANNOT stop there!!!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2007 11:11 am Title: Dinner And A Side Trip

Don't you hate it when you're snowed in at a cozy house with the person you're secretly in love with?  No?  Me neither!!!

Please tell me that sharing a room is involved...

Nice job. 

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Road Trip

Great chapter!  Loved the tension when Karen kissed Jim!  Can't wait to see how their dinner goes!  and of course  you saved the best line for last :)

Reviewer: super_perfect Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Road Trip

awesome! love it! love to see playful jim and pam. more more more!!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Road Trip

smiling that smile that Pam knew was only for her -- yup! Karen can try & kiss him all she wants, but there is only one woman for Jim.  Dying to see what comes next...

Reviewer: injoy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 11:39 am Title: Partners

could be interesting.  i'd definately read more.  so, write it.

Reviewer: gse45 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 10:54 am Title: Partners

continue, please continue

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 06:33 am Title: Partners

Well, you can't start there and leave us hanging!  Go on, MrsLH!!  

Reviewer: sarah Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 11:31 pm Title: Partners

I really think you should continue!  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I love that this seems realistic,  and i love the idea of Micheal pushing Jim and Pam together! and i kind of like the title i mean its not creative but it tells you exactly what to expect.

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