Date: April 27, 2007 05:23 pm Title: And They Lived Happily Ever After...
I loved when Jim said Pam was adorable...it was too cute. I also loved the end of course..... you made me love Mrs. Beesely even more! I loved this story if only this had really happened. You did a great job with it!
Author's Response: Thank you! It was tough, but I had fun with it. Glad to hear you did to.
Date: April 17, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Say Anything
Oh, this is so cute. I think my only complaint so far is that I would have liked to see how Jim interacted with Pam's mom during that first three hours, but that's only a minor wish and I can still hope that we'll see some of that since they're stuck there! The breakup and post-breakup-talk were handled well, and I'm enjoying where this is going. Great stuff!
Date: March 07, 2007 06:48 pm Title: The Call
I like how you handled the break up...as long as Jim goes into detail with Pam at some point so WE get to find out what happened. Unless we could see the Karen/Jim convo from Jim's POV.
I'm enjoying this fic a lot! It's especially cool that it came out of what has been my favorite episode of the season so far. Looking forward to more!
Date: March 06, 2007 04:54 pm Title: The Call
This is great, but let's get to the good stuff!!! Sorry to be impatient, it is seriously good.
Author's Response: Keep in mind that this is a K rated fic! But that said, the "good stuff" should be coming up in the next chapter...hopefully.
Date: February 27, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Dinner And A Side Trip
aww...i love Jim meeting Pam's mom! I am so excited to hear about them staying the night there, I can't wait. I wish we could have heard more of the conversation between the three of them and i would love to hear her mom's thoughts about Jim. Thank you for updating, please dont take so long next time!!
Date: January 22, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Road Trip
Great chapter! Loved the tension when Karen kissed Jim! Can't wait to see how their dinner goes! and of course you saved the best line for last :)
Date: January 22, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Road Trip
awesome! love it! love to see playful jim and pam. more more more!!!
Date: January 22, 2007 10:54 am Title: Partners
continue, please continue
Date: January 21, 2007 11:31 pm Title: Partners
I really think you should continue! I can't wait to see what happens next. I love that this seems realistic, and i love the idea of Micheal pushing Jim and Pam together! and i kind of like the title i mean its not creative but it tells you exactly what to expect.